Super God Collection
by Demon Cicada
About This Novel
The game player Xu Zhou came to a magnificent world of martial arts and became an ordinary boy in Crouching Tiger Village. He learned blacksmithing from his father since he was a child. When he turned sixteen, he was ready to fulfill the rule passed down by his ancestors: to forge a mysterious weapon alone. Unexpectedly, I unexpectedly activated the basic game skills I carry with me: gathering skills, and a game backpack.
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Official(105)Scraped 6d ago
The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel
I thought having a system would be a cool article, but I ended up watching non-stop bickering. After reading over a hundred chapters, two-thirds of it was just talking nonsense.
Let the author take a look
When I read novels, I usually buy them for free until they are on the shelves. After they are released, I read the pirated copies to see if they are good. If they are good, I order them all. The setting of your novel is very good, but the plot is so protracted that you can write about 10 chapters just by eating. Moreover, the writing skills still need to be improved. The aspect of describing characters is a failure. It is really uncomfortable to forcefully reduce the intelligence. I will withdraw. Goodbye.
It's too watery, the word count is too obvious, it's annoyingly complicated, there's too much nonsense, and it's from
It's too shabby, the word count is too obvious, it's annoyingly complicated, there's too much nonsense, and it started right after it was put on the shelves, it's disgusting, I thought it was pretty good at first, but the word count above is too obvious
What should I do if I really can't stand it anymore?
golden finger problem
Your golden finger explanation is not clear. After collecting a sword, you will get the blueprint. After collecting that broom, you will get a new one. Anyway, there are many problems.
Too watery
It's too wordy and the word count is too watery. The subject matter is good, but it's too watery.
What protagonist?
After reading the fourth chapter, I ran out of ideas. The protagonist is reborn and inherits his memories. Then why should he be angry at his own father during the exam? He is so incompetent and furious, zz protagonist? This is really poisonous to me.
It's like a football, about one meter long!
"It's like a football, about one meter long!" It's poisonous to me. Goodbye (Chapter 4)
detailed
I just missed going to the bathroom and didn't write anything down. Everything else is almost complete.
admire admire
This is the first time I have seen an author with such a good word count👍👍
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Community(0)
Official(105)Scraped 6d ago
The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel
I thought having a system would be a cool article, but I ended up watching non-stop bickering. After reading over a hundred chapters, two-thirds of it was just talking nonsense.
Let the author take a look
When I read novels, I usually buy them for free until they are on the shelves. After they are released, I read the pirated copies to see if they are good. If they are good, I order them all. The setting of your novel is very good, but the plot is so protracted that you can write about 10 chapters just by eating. Moreover, the writing skills still need to be improved. The aspect of describing characters is a failure. It is really uncomfortable to forcefully reduce the intelligence. I will withdraw. Goodbye.
It's too watery, the word count is too obvious, it's annoyingly complicated, there's too much nonsense, and it's from
It's too shabby, the word count is too obvious, it's annoyingly complicated, there's too much nonsense, and it started right after it was put on the shelves, it's disgusting, I thought it was pretty good at first, but the word count above is too obvious
What should I do if I really can't stand it anymore?
golden finger problem
Your golden finger explanation is not clear. After collecting a sword, you will get the blueprint. After collecting that broom, you will get a new one. Anyway, there are many problems.
Too watery
It's too wordy and the word count is too watery. The subject matter is good, but it's too watery.
What protagonist?
After reading the fourth chapter, I ran out of ideas. The protagonist is reborn and inherits his memories. Then why should he be angry at his own father during the exam? He is so incompetent and furious, zz protagonist? This is really poisonous to me.
It's like a football, about one meter long!
"It's like a football, about one meter long!" It's poisonous to me. Goodbye (Chapter 4)
detailed
I just missed going to the bathroom and didn't write anything down. Everything else is almost complete.
admire admire
This is the first time I have seen an author with such a good word count👍👍
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