Beginning with the Lizard Men and Traveling Through the Middle Ages

Let's summarize it first, it doesn't matter whether you like it or not. Just read the first 80 chapters. It was a blast to play. What follows is just an excuse by the author to use group portraits and foreshadowing backgrounds. The climax is supposed to be sluggish, and the parts that are supposed to soothe the plot are disgusting. As title. The first wave of struggle was indeed a good description of the struggle to the death, but later it became clear that the author wanted to write a big scene, so he started to plant foreshadowings everywhere. But have you ever thought that your foreshadowings would become more and more full of the whole chapter, especially after the Vulcan died at the end. After the protagonist's first war scene, which I think is the best one I have written, I think it is good to decide to go south and then north. I can predict that there will be a big one going south and another big one going north. The journey in the middle will ease the plot. The plot is arranged very well as I expected. However, I can still accept some of the plots during the journey south (I mean the length of the plot). I can only say that the journey south was average, with a small climax, and then the story of the journey north began to be endless for fifty chapters. In fact, the main character was probably less than half in my impression. I read them all in one go, which forcibly polished off my expectations for the subsequent plots, so I started to impatiently skip reading, and even went directly to the latest section of the undead disaster. All I can say about this recent episode is rubbish. What do you want to express? The protagonist of the story has only one role, including the emperor (not the emperor), knights, dwarves, ratmen, vampires, undead, and chaos. Each has a role, and each has more roles than the protagonist. Therefore, within the limited space, the emperor's desire to protect his people is briefly mentioned; the sacrifices of the knights are briefly mentioned; the rise of vampires to being hammered down by dwarves is briefly mentioned; and the destruction of the undead disaster is even more briefly mentioned. Did you find anything missing? Yes, our protagonist, the lizard man who recklessly penetrated the ancient war hammer, can only survive in the cracks of the real protagonist above (in fact, there are very few or no protagonists in many chapters). For example, in the latest plot, the protagonist and the ancestor of vampires fought. The fight was so violent that the earth was shattered and the human beings were trembling. It was better to leave it alone. This section is good. At least there are more; after the other "protagonist" scenes I mentioned in the previous paragraph, the protagonist discovered that Chaos was messing with him (the number of words in this section of the plot is almost as many as the number of words in my previous paragraph); after the "protagonists" took turns again, that is, until the latest chapter I saw, the lizard man discovered the figure of the initiator of the undead disaster and prepared to mess with him. What I mean by saying so much is that everyone has a role, but everyone's role is average. How do you want me to bring emotion? Originally, I also liked to go straight through at the beginning, but then I started to be disgusted by Chaos in the chapter going north, and it continued to be disgusting for fifty chapters. During this period, there was also a legend interspersed with the female vampire taking power to rule the empire, and the various conspiracies and intrigues of the ministers (jiang zhi). I can endure these. Okay, it's finally time for a big fight, ntm, is the knight's sacrifice moving me? And then disgusting the clown-like vampire count? I really want to blow up these SB gadgets with one punch. I see that the protagonist is now basically dispensable and can completely break through the defense. You can already guess what the plot is going to be like. The protagonist, who has gone through a lot of hard work, and his kind kill that thing (that's the instigator, what the hell), the undead dissipate, beat up the Chaos Ratmen, and then the greenskins beat the dwarves. The protagonist goes to help, and it's a long journey again (I was surprised to realize that this is not the current plot in a different skin). I am a Cloud Hammer, so my review is based on the content of the novel (but in fact, there is no dark and heavy feeling behind Warhammer as far as I know, especially the feeling that the building is about to collapse). The protagonist's decision may be right, but it is like a joke, and the decision has been made hastily, which looks like child's play. The whole thing looks more like a game article. Love is as deep as hate, otherwise I wouldn't get up and write so much at one or two o'clock in the middle of the night. It's really difficult to find a book that suits my appetite. It's better to write what I want to say. My idea for the rest of the story is to reduce the length of the other characters and focus on the protagonist Lynch. After finishing it, I will briefly outline how many knights, poor people and dwarves died. It is better than writing it all in vernacular to stiffly create an atmosphere. The incident of the female vampire usurping the throne can be left behind after defending the corpse of the god (after all, in the outline, this is just the background of defending the corpse of the god, but there is too much to write). Firstly, it shows that time is tight. Secondly, the struggle for power is not the main theme of the book. The scenes of Tzeentch believers are reduced a bit on the road, and they are concentrated in larger conflicts. A group portrait does not mean that each character has the same number of roles, nor does it mean that it is a history book. A few sentences can leave a deep impression on the readers, which is also a group portrait. At least it is better than forgetting it after reading it now. Of course, there is an easier way, to change the title of the book to "Medieval Warhammer Chronicles" (laughs) That's all I have to say, I hope you will understand.

As I read, the protagonist's self gradually lost in the process of adding and acquiring entries. In order to resist the invasion of subspace/four vendors, protect the "Great Guardian", and for Slan's immortality, he sacrificed everything he could, including himself. World Sang, don't be afraid, if you want to hang me, I will hang in front of you first👍👍👍

The lizard thing looks great! More! Yes yes! (Skavin Rot +1)

It's very interesting. There are very few people who write novels like this.

Very beautiful! Highly recommend to you? Nice

I wrote this comment after reading it for a long time. I haven't written another comment for a long, long time.

It was already very good, although the ending was quite rushed🙃

Very beautiful Highly recommended good looking

The subject matter attracted me, but in the early stage there were many characters and few descriptions, so I couldn't remember these characters. In addition, the transitions are abrupt, such as giving an ellipsis and jumping to the psychological activities of the characters in another scene. The reading is not smooth. I need to pause and think before I know to change the scene.

Is there a Sinian plot? Which chapter is it in?