Nine Realms of Light

Hey hey, don't say much, just give me five stars first

I think I can make some small comments. 1. The distribution of the situation on the mainland is not very clear. Only the Gongque Empire and the Dead Light Clan appear here. The basic continental shelf is not shown. As a preface, I can briefly mention it. 2. The occupations of magician and warrior nanny are not clearly written, because not all book friends here may know them. The most convenient way is to write representative characters. 3. Since Shifang College is the most prestigious college, there should be other colleges. The rookie did not mention it clearly, but just mentioned it briefly. 4. The magic special effects... Emmm... Are too few, there is no complete sense of effect, and the architecture does not have a complete feeling. The buildings of the college can be unique and there are many buildings. This should be a common situation in the imperial capital. Newbies can grasp the color, structural characteristics or existing form to give book friends a general impression. 5. You, a novice, need to work harder on your character descriptions. Don't just "talk" when you speak. This will easily make book lovers feel reading fatigue. It's not necessary to cover the whole picture, just focus on a few features. The above is my current impression. Finally, come on, rookie!

Looks good, it shouldn't end soon

Although I don't understand the introduction, I believe this book will be as good as the last one.

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Come on Come on ヽ(○^㉨^)ﾉ♪