Martial Arts Immortality: Set a Goal and Complete It

Prices have skyrocketed. Doing heavy work costs 100 renminbi a month, and doing laundry costs 10 renminbi a day. How is this possible? There is also a house worth 400 taels for a two-bedroom apartment. Selling a house costs Mr. Li Sanye most of his life savings.

The author's thinking pattern is too small, and there is nothing much to say at the beginning. However, before the protagonist solves the problem of food and clothing and begins to pursue extraordinary things, he should speculate on the upper limit of the world's strength and set up an attempt to become the best in the world and explore the depth of the world. Also, making good use of this system is equivalent to predicting the future. People can prepare for disasters beforehand. Some disasters are desperate situations that cannot be predicted and solved in advance. If you miss the time, the system cannot change your destiny. The system sets the first task to survive and avoid desperate disasters, and the second task is to improve your strength. I hope the author will come back and upgrade the system. For example, multiple tasks can be set up in different levels. If tasks conflict, the first level task will take precedence. The book should be more rigorous in the early stages, otherwise it will be a pure novel and the early efforts will be wasted.

Goldfinger was too powerful, and as a result, the author didn't have enough brains for the protagonist, and the writing was a mess.

The front part is still interesting, but the back part feels like a running story, the sense of crisis is gone, and the protagonist is too exciting, and being the savior is too tiring to watch, and it is not very interesting. After all, in real society, there are only a small number of people who want to be the savior protagonist, and most people are ordinary people.

For dozens of chapters, you've been talking about your family's shortcomings, and your little stone, Zhang Chunhua, what? Spring again! I see you are having sex

If the system is so miserable, it will be killed directly! And why is it so difficult to set up the initial settings? Is it interesting? System text, I'm not happy that you want to bully the system!

Author, are you sure that you have passed through the earth? You don't have any knowledge of survival. Except for golden fingers, you can starve to death. Pure water numbers.

One food hunt, one archery, can be written in forty or fifty chapters. You can compare with others in ten days and two years without anyone suspecting whether it is a magic way. There is no bone detection setting. It's a mess. Xiaobai's writing is not like this. There is water and the family has to be dragged along. Talent, no need to read later, it starts to fail in the early stage, and collapses in the later stage, no need to read, it is useless, next book.

It sucked in the end. It was interesting at the beginning, but not anymore at the end.

The protagonist is a virgin bitch, lacks love, is an orphan, and is disgusting