Peninsula Love Information

I really can't stand it lately. I have a template every day, which is the same as a running account. In order to amuse the two of them, An invites them to hang out every day. If Zhixiu goes, she will be jealous, or if Zhixiu doesn't go, she will be jealous. The male protagonist clearly knows that Ji Soo will be jealous, but every time other girls call him, he will go. If he doesn't go, he won't write. Why don't you start a harem? It's more interesting than nesting dolls every day. Look at Cheng Gou next door. The rabbit is already obsessed with him. It's not afraid of not having a plot, and it's much more interesting.

The author's writing style... Always gives me the feeling of a science student writing a junior high school narrative. It's the feeling that you want to correct and there are a lot of things that can be improved, but it just happens to be a self-contained way that you don't care about...

Obviously the writing in the front is good, but the writing in the back is terrible. If you really want to get into the trap, I suggest you read the chapters by yourself.

It's just a piece of shit. This is the most clumsy novel I've ever seen in my life. It's so awesome.

Water flows downward, and the lower it is, the more water it can hold.

The writing is still okay, but there are too many repetitive contents, which makes it a bit watery. It's already been 300 chapters, and the plot feels like there's not much development, it's just about secretly falling in love. Then I don't want to be discovered by my friends. The male protagonist's career seems to have not developed much, and none of the shows he said he would participate in have ever started. (I'm skipping a chapter later. I don't know if I've written about this before.) If you write it like this, how many words should you write in this article? Emmm, the supporting characters' inner thoughts are also quite repetitive, too many. The relationship aspect is still well written, but there must also be some other plots, such as building a career, so that the relationship can develop later, and then it can be officially announced, otherwise it will always be a plot of secretly falling in love. I hope it can be changed later, but I can't keep up now.

W Oh, I didn't expect to be so trustworthy... It's okay to hide the relationship. Everyone knows what's hidden. Why don't you become famous quickly and move on to the next stage?

Some things are too repetitive and only happen between two people

Let's give a brief review. The emotional line is very delicate and does not give the protagonist too much gold. It's just that after falling in love with Ji-soo, his rap skills have increased. The little gold finger is just right and does not feel too abrupt, and the love and career have dual development. This book still has great potential, but it still depends on the direction of the protagonist's career development. My Artist Neighbor and Peninsula Love Information. These two books are definitely the most popular works of HY in recent times. There is no brainless promotion and opening of a harem. Simple daily descriptions are very good. The only shortcoming is The author, this old guy, updates too slowly 🐔8

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