
The End of the Road
About This Novel
The road ahead is long and far, and I will search high and low. When the building of civilization collapses in the twilight and the smoke of gunpowder, and the beauty of the past has become a thing of the past and the clouds and smoke are shattered in the chaos of war, I dare to ask where is the way? "The legs are fucking growing on you. You can go wherever you want. If you don't accept it, your legs will be broken." "If you don't accept it, then I'll go. Goodbye."
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Official(2)Scraped 3d ago
About the protagonist
Although I think everyone can be the protagonist, the name of your protagonist, the author, is a bit... Ahem, doesn't the protagonist change his name? Finally... Come on, author, your writing is very good. Update Do your best, a healthy body is the most important! Let's move forward for our health!
segmentation
Author, although your segmentation is not that serious yet, you should change it first. It's so long that when you put it all together, it made my eyes dazzled. It seems that this description is a bit exaggerated! (Although you don't have it yet, I guess you will soon) But I don't seem to be qualified to criticize others. I am also a cutie who doesn't know how to segment! Poor baby, I haven't finished my summer homework yet, and I feel like my future life will be dark... So, author, please don't be like me and play too much with your mobile phone. The result is that you feel comfortable, but you have to pay a huge price! But even though it's thundering and raining here, my mobile phone can give me a sense of security... Emmmm~ It seems like you can't use your phone during thunder! (This seems to be another sick sentence!)
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Community(0)
Official(2)Scraped 3d ago
About the protagonist
Although I think everyone can be the protagonist, the name of your protagonist, the author, is a bit... Ahem, doesn't the protagonist change his name? Finally... Come on, author, your writing is very good. Update Do your best, a healthy body is the most important! Let's move forward for our health!
segmentation
Author, although your segmentation is not that serious yet, you should change it first. It's so long that when you put it all together, it made my eyes dazzled. It seems that this description is a bit exaggerated! (Although you don't have it yet, I guess you will soon) But I don't seem to be qualified to criticize others. I am also a cutie who doesn't know how to segment! Poor baby, I haven't finished my summer homework yet, and I feel like my future life will be dark... So, author, please don't be like me and play too much with your mobile phone. The result is that you feel comfortable, but you have to pay a huge price! But even though it's thundering and raining here, my mobile phone can give me a sense of security... Emmmm~ It seems like you can't use your phone during thunder! (This seems to be another sick sentence!)









