Omen
by Zero Degree
About This Novel
After my grandmother died, she left behind a comb and a book, which I read as a little book when I was a child.
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Official(8)Scraped 18d ago
No way, get out of the trap...
The author's writing skills are good, but the plot concept is really ordinary, there are many inconsistencies, and the protagonist's personality is too contrasting. Mainly, some of the plots lacked foreshadowing and seemed very abrupt. He fell in love with a woman out of nowhere, and she was also the daughter of an enemy who would never stop fighting. In fact, this is understandable. It should have been better with more foreshadowing. There are also some basic routines. It's a bit childish to deal with it. It's obvious that the person wants to kill you and then do it quickly, but the male protagonist inexplicably asks someone to do something for him, and the person even goes out of his way to help. Can you please stop being so naive? It's so unreasonable, it makes people very angry. Also, Mo Ji took the male protagonist to see her father before going to Shenzhen. The old man and the male protagonist got along quite well, but after returning from Shenzhen, when he acted as Mo Ji's temporary boyfriend and went to the salon, Mo Ji's father did not recognize the male protagonist. This is too contradictory. I feel that the plot is too inconsistent, as if it was not written by one person. In short, it feels weird...
Many interesting little stories
Everyone inside is very vivid, and I am always on tenterhooks every time I go on an adventure! Danger abounds! It's not just about touching the Golden Captain, he has flesh and blood, a sense of justice, snowy mountains, deserts, islands, Qinling Mountains, deep mountains, the Northeast, so many stories! So creative! The more you look at it, the better it looks! Be principled and know love and hate!
In the end, these 100-plus chapters are very confusing. The chapters are incoherent. It seems very laborious. I would like the author to review it carefully before uploading.
Very interesting!
Very good, ups and downs, narratives and discussions, intriguing!
Author, is your book not published on this platform?
Why are so few people watching? So strange
Let it go
Tell me what you mean.
very nice
Quite fun. The plot is also very good, the protagonist's personality is exactly the same as mine
Rating
Community(0)
Official(8)Scraped 18d ago
No way, get out of the trap...
The author's writing skills are good, but the plot concept is really ordinary, there are many inconsistencies, and the protagonist's personality is too contrasting. Mainly, some of the plots lacked foreshadowing and seemed very abrupt. He fell in love with a woman out of nowhere, and she was also the daughter of an enemy who would never stop fighting. In fact, this is understandable. It should have been better with more foreshadowing. There are also some basic routines. It's a bit childish to deal with it. It's obvious that the person wants to kill you and then do it quickly, but the male protagonist inexplicably asks someone to do something for him, and the person even goes out of his way to help. Can you please stop being so naive? It's so unreasonable, it makes people very angry. Also, Mo Ji took the male protagonist to see her father before going to Shenzhen. The old man and the male protagonist got along quite well, but after returning from Shenzhen, when he acted as Mo Ji's temporary boyfriend and went to the salon, Mo Ji's father did not recognize the male protagonist. This is too contradictory. I feel that the plot is too inconsistent, as if it was not written by one person. In short, it feels weird...
Many interesting little stories
Everyone inside is very vivid, and I am always on tenterhooks every time I go on an adventure! Danger abounds! It's not just about touching the Golden Captain, he has flesh and blood, a sense of justice, snowy mountains, deserts, islands, Qinling Mountains, deep mountains, the Northeast, so many stories! So creative! The more you look at it, the better it looks! Be principled and know love and hate!
In the end, these 100-plus chapters are very confusing. The chapters are incoherent. It seems very laborious. I would like the author to review it carefully before uploading.
Very interesting!
Very good, ups and downs, narratives and discussions, intriguing!
Author, is your book not published on this platform?
Why are so few people watching? So strange
Let it go
Tell me what you mean.
very nice
Quite fun. The plot is also very good, the protagonist's personality is exactly the same as mine
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