
Disaster and Judgment
by Broken Notes
About This Novel
Xiao Yi, a name of despair, chaos, and sadness. Both his parents died when he was young. He wandered on the edge of death several times, and finally became stronger, had a wife, and children. But is the story really the end? Haha
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Official(1)Scraped 3d ago
How can I put it this way? Overall, it feels good, but I think the scene where the parents died is not realistic enough. Generally speaking, people are speechless when they are at the climax of their emotions, so they can just say a few words, unless the person has a very high level of consciousness. Of course, it is not realistic. How can a child have such a high level of consciousness? I think something needs to be changed here.
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Official(1)Scraped 3d ago
How can I put it this way? Overall, it feels good, but I think the scene where the parents died is not realistic enough. Generally speaking, people are speechless when they are at the climax of their emotions, so they can just say a few words, unless the person has a very high level of consciousness. Of course, it is not realistic. How can a child have such a high level of consciousness? I think something needs to be changed here.









