The Breaking Elite: Become Shalele's Brother at the Beginning

I am Shalele, a cute and rich girl!

1. First of all, the author sets the protagonist's identity as Shalele's brother, and has accumulated enough resources through fetal transmutation, which allows the protagonist to participate in the plot more flexibly and add original plots. It's a wise choice. 2. At the beginning, the protagonist's concern for Shalele led him to join the Ten Thousand Beasts, and even moved his office to the Security Department. The advancement of this plot is a bit stiff, because the plot is too fragmented and there is insufficient connection between the previous and later episodes. For example, there is no other description of the protagonist Chenle Group except for "bigger than ten thousand beasts", "stronger than ten thousand beasts" and "high-tech company". It seems that the protagonist's behavior as the CEO of ten thousand beasts is too hasty. Maybe the author wants to make the plot advancement more convenient by leaving blank space (just like when Hu Qiang and others are trapped in the elevator, they only need to reveal the "Elevator Destroyer" program written by Ouyang Murphy at the end), but the relevant settings should also be released in an appropriate amount. Only one Jarvis's expressiveness is not enough. 3. At the same time, it can be seen that the plot set by the author is carefully adapted to the characters of the original drama, but it does not describe the protagonist's personality in detail, which makes the protagonist seem out of place. Instead, he seems to be wrapped up in the plot and full of uncertainty. For example, in Dali's internship boyfriend contract, the protagonist is unwilling to date, is afraid of trouble, and his sister does not agree. He would rather break up after three months of entanglement than directly say no to Zhuge Dali, which is a bit irrational. It may be that the author, subject three, was too anxious and did not consider the details, which made the protagonist synchronize. The author can relax and try to slow down the pace. At the same time, you can let others narrate several paragraphs of the protagonist's entrepreneurial deeds to determine the protagonist's character and make the logic of his behavior clearer. 4. Regarding CP, there currently appear to be three candidates: Shalele, Murphy, and Dali. First of all, the line of Shalele is the best to write. Play it steadily and change your mentality. You only need to add the legal patch of the other world and they can be together smoothly. The pairing of Ouyang Murphy's line may be smaller, because the growth of Hu Qiang's character is basically bound to Murphy. Only Hu Qiang can tolerate Murphy's rebelliousness, and Murphy needs to break Hu Qiang's numbness. At the same time, Hu Zuofei is different from the great CP. Murphy gave Hu Qiang not only work help, but also spiritual salvation. Zhuge Dali's line is related to the degree of linkage with iPartment to a certain extent. The protagonist and Zhuge Dali and Zhang Wei save the curry sauce together is a good starting point. Compared with Zhang Wei, Zhuge Dali must give priority to the protagonist and seek to meet again. Since then, the protagonist has connected with her. If the protagonist agrees directly, then Zhuge Dali will lose the inevitability of moving into the love apartment (in the original plot, Dali moved into the love apartment mainly to fall in love with Zhang Wei), then her only connection with the apartment is Hu Yifei, the teacher. The protagonist obviously will not stay in the love apartment. Based on Hu Yifei's teacher relationship, the protagonist and the love apartment will not be too intertwined. Unless there is a push to let Zhuge Dali move into the love apartment, such as Zhao Haitang's harassment. In addition, the protagonist does not necessarily need to get together with Zhuge Dali. After all, her original purpose of dating was just to practice trial and error and write a report, and she has already interned as the protagonist's secretary at Wanjue. Whether she rejects the intern boyfriend or breaks up automatically when the contract expires, it will not affect the relationship and can still be linked to the love apartment. I have already thought about my options. After the protagonist's contract with Dali expires, Zhang Wei can also be the intern's second boyfriend. If you feel uncomfortable, Dali and Rose might as well be together. 🤡

The protagonist's position is the president, and there are two companies, with so many things, but he ends up in the affairs department. Have you considered the issue of unequal status between the two parties?

The second season is almost finished. I hope there will be a third season. There is a recent book shortage. The author doesn't know how to be a eunuch.

Lele, Lele, Lele😷, Lele emoticon pack is made by myself

676902930 is the group leader for book friends (this guy has a lot of vests), come in and you won't get lost.

Author, I think you can think about how to deal with the matter of Hu Qiang's wife Weiwei.

Lin Chen and Sha Lele are not brothers and sisters, so they can be together, right?

How do you get 30,000 words and 2,000 monthly votes?

Good job. I failed too.