Military Industry Hegemony

Originally, I thought it was good. Why did we separate because I was afraid that we would not be able to develop? Maybe I was selfish, but I always feel sorry for Liu Yun. Do you know that when I saw this, I turned off my phone. It was 2 o'clock in the morning. I was really upset. Maybe I really liked the previous plot, but suddenly (Cheng Yaojin) came up. , But I can't let it go in my heart! I couldn't let it go! At that time, I really wanted to vent. I really wanted to beat the protagonist. .

I haven't started reading this book yet, so I won't rate it yet, but I think with so many good reviews, it shouldn't be bad. I especially like reading about military industry and the like, but there are not many such books, and even less good ones. I won't go into details. I will go read it now.

To be honest, among the many military novels I have read, this book is really good, at least it can be ranked in the top five! Don't be too angry! ! ! Personally, I have been reading books for twelve years! Come on, just like the characters in your works - attack, platinum is not a dream! ――――――――――――Support your book fan (So Luo)

If you can't make people happy, then don't provoke them. After falling in love with a woman for more than 300 chapters, it turns out that she is not the heroine. I don't know how sweet it is in the middle. If you are not a stallion, don't write so many women's favor. It's uncomfortable to watch for a long time. I thought it was the heroine, and then she married a foreign country.

Why did the internal treasury of the nursing home get corrupted? Why do tens of thousands of female donkeys scream in the middle of the night? Who is responsible for the serial pig rape case? The door of the nunnery gets knocked every night. Is it a human or a ghost? What is hidden behind the unexpected pregnancies of hundreds of mummies? Is behind all this the distortion of human nature or the loss of morality? Is it the burst of hormones or the helplessness of hunger and thirst? If you want to know the real inside story, please pay attention to the book (Taoist Exorcist), and let us follow the camera into the inner world of pig feet!

I really can't stand it anymore. 1. Writing style: There are too many narrations and narrations, and too few dialogues, resulting in insufficiently vivid characterization. 2. Text: There are too many typos in every chapter. Longer paragraphs usually have at least one typo. You are not serious about the author, how can you ask readers to follow the book and subscribe to it? 3. Plot: There is no distinction between severity and importance. Since the title of the book is "Military Industry Overlord", the focus is naturally on the R&D and production of "military industry". As a result, I wrote dozens of chapters on the front line and 3 chapters on giving birth! If you don't drive the national highway properly, you'll always drive into the fields! 4. The basic settings are unreasonable: Product research and development seems too easy. It seems that it only takes a year and a half to build a sniper rifle and a car. You must also pay attention to some scientific rules when cheating. And you, a college student, wouldn't it be fun to cheat all the way to save a factory and start a company? You insist on imposing the role of deputy captain of the special operations brigade and specially recruit into the army. This is outrageous.

Why must the protagonist make a decision directly between Liu Yun and Wei Lingling, and easily succumb to the pressure of his family? Such an attitude is completely inconsistent with the psychology of a vigorous young man. What's more, the protagonist has traveled through time, so this plot is completely unreasonable. It's too far-fetched. Author, please answer

Liu Yun left when I read around chapter 400, and then he just accepted it after getting married mdzz

Author, you either don't write, and if you want to write about Liu Yun, just keep writing. The two people described in the front are in love, but suddenly someone intervenes in the back, and finally writes Liu Yun to death. I know there will be regrets in real life, but isn't the purpose of novels to make up for the regrets in reality and make readers feel happy? What you wrote is too frustrating and uncomfortable. I skipped directly to the ending after reading the beginning, just to see if the character I spent a lot of time describing at the beginning would end up with the protagonist. This is because I have been tricked many times. At first, a girl was with the main character, and it was really frustrating to spend a lot of time describing their relationship but not being together in the end. What did you think, author? Can't you write in a proper manner?

The protagonist is like a marionette. Everything has to be approved by others. There are restrictions everywhere. He can't even decide on his own marriage. Afterward, he vented his anger and soon got together with the person who came after him. It was extremely poisonous.