Time Travel to 1992

The author's writing level needs to be improved. First of all, there is no distinction between primary and secondary, and too many plots are used to write about secondary characters, which makes people feel that the article is too watery and unattractive. Secondly, the plot is not well conceived. At the beginning of the novel, the protagonist is a wage earner in the factory, and he is still an 18-year-old boy. It is simply whimsical to expect that the company will give you a lot of money and reuse you with a suggestion. Finally, the author does not have enough overall view. To make money, you must start from the overall situation and engage in big projects.

Write, write, write, write down the heroine.

It's okay to write, but it's too short, too short

What I didn't want to say at first, the author described, stated, and introduced thousands of words, but there was no sense of immersion at all. It seemed like a diary-like running account. Moreover, without strong national power and background, and without winning over the white skin, do you still want to create the so-called Black Wukong? It was just laughable. Without considering the authenticity at all, you can't even be counted as YY. You can only be said to be writing in a dream!

I can still watch it. It's hard to say whether it's true or not. I feel good watching it.

The author is too short and weak, please add more updates😱😱😱

Yes, it's just that the author didn't check after coding (Yuanhua finished eating)! ! !

It's okay, although some of the author's works are too bad

There are several majors that are unfinished. Pack up your things.

The previous works written by this author were all good. I don't know why, but this work is all about the evils of human nature. It's not refreshing, it's all depressing, and one blockage after another! Maybe the author didn't handle it well, or it was the same writing routine more than ten years ago...