Urban Eye Magician

How many irresponsible books have you written? ? You said you won't let us down? ? Doesn't this one work? Neither can I? You can't even go to school? Are you kidding us? ? I also know why you want to use poor grades as an excuse for not being able to write anymore. Haha, you can do whatever you want. I think your dozens of books can be as successful as the first book you abandoned.

Look at the book that the university paid attention to you. The university stopped reading it after it was written about time travel. After that, I generally knew about your book, and later the Supreme also read it. I am also writing a novel, because I saw that your high school book was very popular, so I wanted to learn from you. Let's get to the point. In fact, I analyzed why your college book was popular, and the reasons why it wasn't popular later on. Maybe you didn't realize it yourself. But let the beholder know. In comparison, what are the characteristics of the one you studied in college? Maybe you wanted to repeat high school in this book, but unfortunately you didn't do it. In fact, the characteristics of colleges and universities are that they are more childish, funny, and animated, which is more suitable for Chuangshi's readership. In fact, most of Chuangshi's readers are probably young people under the age of 20. You did not maintain this style in Supreme, and wrote it with a more serious feel. In other words, the plot in Supreme is not particularly novel, weird, nonsensical, or weird. This is true even when you wrote about battle royale and magician. The magician has a little bit of it, but it's very thin. As far as I can see, the book you are writing now will not be popular. Although the pupil technique and the demon fox you wrote have some supernatural things, they are actually quite old-fashioned and do not show off your unique "quirky" style of painting. I actually wanted to go into more detail, but it's hard to describe it. This kind of funny painting style is actually similar to cartoons, such as Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf. It is simple and childish, but also imaginative and childlike. You can't write in a too adult or realistic way, you have to write in the style of a cartoon. For example, take a character, you can't write it too complicated, but have a single but distinct personality. For example, take Lazy Sheep, he is just lazy and nothing else, but he is very cute. You write a villain, he is bad but also silly and cute, just like the Big Big Wolf. In fact, many of these online articles are essentially fairy tales due to the age of the readers. When you look at Doupo, it looks very much like a fairy tale, but this is a fairy tale based in China, not a Western prince and princess. Of course, there are also more complex and profound web articles, which vary from website to website and from person to person. If you want to change, of course you can write in other styles. But the style of your college is indeed this simple and interesting style, and this style is also quite popular. I want to learn your style, but I can't, so you'd better develop it yourself. For example, if you are an urban pupil master, how should you write it according to your original college style? You should make it more amusing, the plot more novel, and more unexpected. Of course, this should be quite difficult. In fact, you can think about it for a while before writing a new book.

The doll-like girl mentioned in the introduction of the work seems to have only appeared in the first one or two chapters, and does not seem to have much to do with the protagonist's wonderful encounters?

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I guess Hua Tingyu feeds some cats and dogs with vegetable leaves, and Lin Mingmei is supposed to be a good fox demon. Also, I want to ask, will fox demons kill each other? Also, has the heroine of this book been confirmed? If not, I hope it is Lin Mingmei.

The first novel ended in a hurry for the sake of the new novel. We thought it was okay. The final escape ended quickly. You said you didn't know how to write that type of novel, so you rewrote it. You said you would write the next novel carefully, but then it became more and more perfunctory. Is this what you mean by serious writing? You won't tell readers when it's finished? Responsibility?

Xiwen, you said that the one you wrote in high school without an outline was better, but the later one with an outline and serious writing was not good, so now you try to write in random without an outline. However, I think you've missed the point. In fact, it is not the point that colleges and universities do not have an outline. The point is that the plot is very dense and there are many ideas. This may be because there is no outline and you just write whatever comes to your mind. As for Supreme, you have an outline, for example, there is a competition, and then more than ten chapters are filled with competitions, so readers can guess what you are going to write. But you can't just write without an outline. That has no effect either. You have to maintain the density and creativity of the plot, as well as the continuity. If you have an outline, it will be rigid; if you don't have an outline, it will be messy. The focus is still on the density of the plot and the intensity of the story. Of course, this is easier said than done. Your pupil technique is a bit messy, lacks coherence, and is a bit scattered.

What would happen if humans and foxes merged?

Why are you charged? What a scam. I kept looking and suddenly found out that there was a charge. Oops.

Is this the end of the story? There is no follow-up, what happened next to them?