I Really Don't Want to Be Lin Fan, the Top Student
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Lin Fan, a stupid primary school student, got cheated on for no apparent reason. ... You helped the old lady once, your moral character +1, you read a book, your intelligence +1, you sharpened a pencil, your physical strength +1, you looked in the mirror once, your appearance +1... You looked in the mirror again, your appearance +2... You looked in the mirror again and again, and the hairball curled your lips in disdain: Please don't be so beautiful again and again! ............--Many years later, Lin Fan, who was the top student in the university (a top student?), Was already facing the wind and waves, sailing across the sea, but he faced Ming Xiu and said calmly: I really don't want to be a top student...
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How should I put it? The protagonist is a primary school student who is still very young. It's this that you didn't write about that primary school energy and childlike innocence. There are always all kinds of ridicules from adults, some of which are face-to-face (please ask, how closely does this kind of person relate to the protagonist in reality?). You're so young and you don't know how to write so much (it doesn't feel like childhood). I'm speechless. I hope the author will make the supporting characters smarter, and there won't be that many fools. The supporting characters and the main characters have online IQs. After reading the introduction of this book, the plot is pretty much written, and some people still like it.
To tell the truth, the writing is not very rigorous.
In the past, Lin Fan could improve his appearance by washing his face, but at the age of twelve, he still looks ordinary.
This is a bit inconsistent with your profile!
A good urban novel has been written as science fiction by you. I think the alien writing is a poisonous point and makes people read it incomprehensibly. The most important thing is that your pace is too slow. If you write it this way, I think you can only see the protagonist grow up after 500 chapters.
It feels pretty good when I look at it from the front.
About 150 chapters in, a junior high school student discovers that something is wrong with his female classmate and stalks her. How mature this is. Then he sings and saves money to pay for the female classmate's tuition. Then the money is robbed by a gangster. Isn't the protagonist super strong? He can't stop a gangster. Forget it if you can't stop her. You can just watch a female classmate being slapped by a gangster. The protagonist vs. The gangster (one). Isn't this a killing? If you want to say that the protagonist doesn't care about this female classmate, don't follow her. If you do, protect her well. She has the ability to crush her. It is very unreasonable to watch others being beaten. Moreover, a girl who grew up in a difficult situation has particularly good grades. Such a top student should have a strong self-esteem. You can just follow someone's home and break through their family tragedy, just open the door and go in. Arguing with her father, who is still a first-year junior high school student, talking about a bunch of laws and regulations about compulsory education, what does the female classmate's father think, what does the female classmate think? Her father has been degenerate for so many years, and he may be trying to reason with you, but others will ignore you. Besides, is it not embarrassing for the female classmate? Is the protagonist helping a female classmate when he directly rushes to the theory? It will only make people more sad and embarrassed. It gives me the feeling that the character of the protagonist is a bit embarrassing. I hope it will be better in the future. Come on
Too bland,
I've read Chapter 5, and it's okay to catch up, but it's too bland.
relatively relaxed
It can speed up the progress appropriately. Pig's Knuckle has a behind-the-scenes feel. Overall it's pretty good. I like it better. It's just a little less fun. Also, I've read so many books and it's like a child. As I said before, it's still a bit young. I can understand some of it even if I'm in junior high school, but it doesn't show it at all. I suggest the author fill in this hole a lot. This is my personal opinion.
Follow up soon
If you want to know what will happen next, let's take a look at the Crystal Flame
It feels like you are keeping a running account
It turns out there are really such stupid people in the world
I always thought that everyone has the same IQ on Douyin, but later I realized that my fucking IQ is higher.
It means that this neuron is real water.
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Official(14)Scraped 6d ago
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How should I put it? The protagonist is a primary school student who is still very young. It's this that you didn't write about that primary school energy and childlike innocence. There are always all kinds of ridicules from adults, some of which are face-to-face (please ask, how closely does this kind of person relate to the protagonist in reality?). You're so young and you don't know how to write so much (it doesn't feel like childhood). I'm speechless. I hope the author will make the supporting characters smarter, and there won't be that many fools. The supporting characters and the main characters have online IQs. After reading the introduction of this book, the plot is pretty much written, and some people still like it.
To tell the truth, the writing is not very rigorous.
In the past, Lin Fan could improve his appearance by washing his face, but at the age of twelve, he still looks ordinary.
This is a bit inconsistent with your profile!
A good urban novel has been written as science fiction by you. I think the alien writing is a poisonous point and makes people read it incomprehensibly. The most important thing is that your pace is too slow. If you write it this way, I think you can only see the protagonist grow up after 500 chapters.
It feels pretty good when I look at it from the front.
About 150 chapters in, a junior high school student discovers that something is wrong with his female classmate and stalks her. How mature this is. Then he sings and saves money to pay for the female classmate's tuition. Then the money is robbed by a gangster. Isn't the protagonist super strong? He can't stop a gangster. Forget it if you can't stop her. You can just watch a female classmate being slapped by a gangster. The protagonist vs. The gangster (one). Isn't this a killing? If you want to say that the protagonist doesn't care about this female classmate, don't follow her. If you do, protect her well. She has the ability to crush her. It is very unreasonable to watch others being beaten. Moreover, a girl who grew up in a difficult situation has particularly good grades. Such a top student should have a strong self-esteem. You can just follow someone's home and break through their family tragedy, just open the door and go in. Arguing with her father, who is still a first-year junior high school student, talking about a bunch of laws and regulations about compulsory education, what does the female classmate's father think, what does the female classmate think? Her father has been degenerate for so many years, and he may be trying to reason with you, but others will ignore you. Besides, is it not embarrassing for the female classmate? Is the protagonist helping a female classmate when he directly rushes to the theory? It will only make people more sad and embarrassed. It gives me the feeling that the character of the protagonist is a bit embarrassing. I hope it will be better in the future. Come on
Too bland,
I've read Chapter 5, and it's okay to catch up, but it's too bland.
relatively relaxed
It can speed up the progress appropriately. Pig's Knuckle has a behind-the-scenes feel. Overall it's pretty good. I like it better. It's just a little less fun. Also, I've read so many books and it's like a child. As I said before, it's still a bit young. I can understand some of it even if I'm in junior high school, but it doesn't show it at all. I suggest the author fill in this hole a lot. This is my personal opinion.
Follow up soon
If you want to know what will happen next, let's take a look at the Crystal Flame
It feels like you are keeping a running account
It turns out there are really such stupid people in the world
I always thought that everyone has the same IQ on Douyin, but later I realized that my fucking IQ is higher.
It means that this neuron is real water.
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