God Rewards Those Who Work Hard: Immortality Starts from Hunyuan Zhuang

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Mentally retarded essay It's not an attack on the author, it's just a review after working very hard to read most of it. If you want to write a cool article, then write it in a dark way. If you don't go dark and just rely on a so-called system to promote it without thinking, isn't it too idiotic? Poison, assassination, traps, instigating fights, a brainless protagonist like you can't survive more than three chapters of the truth in any great novel. If you make a little progress in your cultivation, you will immediately become more enlightened than yourself? How idiotic is this? ? And your plot, doesn't it feel too blunt? Was it written by AI? ? ? As soon as the protagonist makes a little progress, the next wave of plot catastrophes will be arranged, and various brainless supporting characters will appear. Brother, let's not talk about how well-matched these characters you wrote are. Can we have normal thinking? Do you want to take action without making preparations and kill without giving away experience? ? ? All the supporting characters don't understand the balance of interests. Oh my god, can you write about an emperor who puts himself at risk for a younger brother who wants to rebel, and even puts an entire dynasty surrounded by strong enemies and creates civil strife to kill the protagonist? Can this make him an emperor? ? ? Do you understand that interests come first in the eyes of the emperor? Was this country already dead before the protagonist ceased to exist? Because even if you write that force is supreme, other countries that he cannot destroy must be able to compete with him, right? Besides, you wrote about traveling across continents to other continents. How about just breaking through the realm and not reaching the point of reaching perfection in this continent, so you have to die thousands of miles away? What do you have to do next? ?

Readers, you can continue reading. I will also read it first. I won't go into other places. At least here, borrowing other people's money for consumption without thinking about paying it back is a bit similar to the current nature of borrowing for consumption.

Author is born Author is born Author is born Author

Why are all the novels so weird? They are either younger sisters or older sisters. Can't write without these?

I was also convinced. Your dancing practice is even better than your cultivation of immortality. Cultivation also requires energy. You don't even need energy to practice martial arts and you can continue practicing without limit. The leader of a bone-breaking spirit can also teleport. No one is as good at cultivating immortals as you are. If it's a score. The full score is 10 points, I will give it one point at most. This point is still a lively point

A little trash, a big trash, teaming up to go down the mountain together, speechless

I've seen Chapter 57. As a protagonist, Wang Ji is more like the protagonist, while Fang Yuan is at most the second male lead.

It's indeed an invincible article, but it's not enjoyable at all.

There are generally no good books for free members, and good books cost money to buy, so membership is of little use. This book is inferior.