From Jailer in Heaven to Domain Lord in the Human World
by I'll Wait For Another Year Of Wind And Snow
About This Novel
The new book "I Pick Up Attributes in Dreams" has been released, please support! This is a world where martial arts and monsters compete! Li Qingfeng traveled through time and became a jailer at the lowest level of the Heavenly Prison. At the same time, he was infected with the aura of evil spirits and evil spirits. He was in danger of dying in three days. There was also the danger of evil spirits escaping from prison hanging over his head. He was very precarious... But when he put a prisoner into a cell, a simple prison book appeared in front of him: [Prisoner: Liu Sanchong] [Martial Arts Realm: Seventh Level of Tongmai] [Sin Level: Three Stars] [Status: in custody] [Capture participation rate: 1%] [Profit: 5 points of cultivation\u002F hour] ps: This book is also called "The True Immortal in Control of Prison" and so on...
What Readers Think
Rating
Community(0)
Official(55)Scraped 17d ago
Anyone who wants to scold you should come here. If you don't want to scold me here, your post will be deleted!
Here you can complain as much as you want, curse as much as you want, and if I have time, I will randomly pick a lucky person to fight with each other. Outside of this post, any posts that are abusive in nature will be deleted and randomly and permanently banned. Thank you for your cooperation!
The characters are very contradictory
On the one hand, she knew something was going on and refused to save her father, but on the other hand, she regarded her daughter as her weak point, forcibly arranged a heroine, and forcibly created flaws for the protagonist to promote the plot. In the face of the unfairness of the depiction, she said that she must only survive her development, and on the other hand, she forcibly created conflicts and mixed in some inexplicable cause and effect. Some of the plot advancements seem very abrupt, and there is no particularly clear main line. If you say it's about emotions, it's mainly about emotions. If you say it's about promoting the progress of the social system, it doesn't feel like it. It's like writing a little bit here and a little bit there. In the end, it feels very messy and strange, and it feels very frustrating to read.
The routine is too old and too watery
I can read the first few dozen chapters, but not the later ones. After a hundred chapters, I just skipped through them, and I couldn't stand the 180 chapters. You can see the ending at a glance, level up - kill - level up again - kill again - kill people then level up - kill again. Well, to say that killing people is wrong, it should be said that arresting people and imprisoning them provides the protagonist with experience. The enemies are all those that the protagonist can defeat. After the protagonist upgrades, he will send a higher level to give him experience, and repeat. There are only a few people in the world who are righteous, and the entire top management is stupid, bad, and incompetent. Compared with the situation in the late Qing Dynasty and the late Ming Dynasty, it can be regarded as a prosperous age. In this kind of world, the human race has not been exterminated. It can only be said that the demon race is just a facade💩
I think the most important thing about online novels is the plot, but this novel starts with Destroying Immortals. There are too many chapters, most of which are explaining various things. How can this be satisfying? Reading online novels is not for learning.
Who plagiarized whom? Too similar?
After reading this chapter, I started to want to give up. Does martial arts practice still need to be explained by science? There's a lot of scientific logic to explain it. Why don't you just change the title of the book to scientific research?
The protagonist, the Virgin Mary, saves the world behind the scenes and saves the world. It is boring and uninteresting.
I just want to say that I leveled up directly without practicing any exercises or anything like that, and no one noticed the abnormality of the protagonist. Level 1 in one day, and everyone became smarter.
The author is so bad at math. There are errors everywhere in the same chapter, let alone several chapters. It is full of errors.
Why does it feel so difficult to read😜
Rating
Community(0)
Official(55)Scraped 17d ago
Anyone who wants to scold you should come here. If you don't want to scold me here, your post will be deleted!
Here you can complain as much as you want, curse as much as you want, and if I have time, I will randomly pick a lucky person to fight with each other. Outside of this post, any posts that are abusive in nature will be deleted and randomly and permanently banned. Thank you for your cooperation!
The characters are very contradictory
On the one hand, she knew something was going on and refused to save her father, but on the other hand, she regarded her daughter as her weak point, forcibly arranged a heroine, and forcibly created flaws for the protagonist to promote the plot. In the face of the unfairness of the depiction, she said that she must only survive her development, and on the other hand, she forcibly created conflicts and mixed in some inexplicable cause and effect. Some of the plot advancements seem very abrupt, and there is no particularly clear main line. If you say it's about emotions, it's mainly about emotions. If you say it's about promoting the progress of the social system, it doesn't feel like it. It's like writing a little bit here and a little bit there. In the end, it feels very messy and strange, and it feels very frustrating to read.
The routine is too old and too watery
I can read the first few dozen chapters, but not the later ones. After a hundred chapters, I just skipped through them, and I couldn't stand the 180 chapters. You can see the ending at a glance, level up - kill - level up again - kill again - kill people then level up - kill again. Well, to say that killing people is wrong, it should be said that arresting people and imprisoning them provides the protagonist with experience. The enemies are all those that the protagonist can defeat. After the protagonist upgrades, he will send a higher level to give him experience, and repeat. There are only a few people in the world who are righteous, and the entire top management is stupid, bad, and incompetent. Compared with the situation in the late Qing Dynasty and the late Ming Dynasty, it can be regarded as a prosperous age. In this kind of world, the human race has not been exterminated. It can only be said that the demon race is just a facade💩
I think the most important thing about online novels is the plot, but this novel starts with Destroying Immortals. There are too many chapters, most of which are explaining various things. How can this be satisfying? Reading online novels is not for learning.
Who plagiarized whom? Too similar?
After reading this chapter, I started to want to give up. Does martial arts practice still need to be explained by science? There's a lot of scientific logic to explain it. Why don't you just change the title of the book to scientific research?
The protagonist, the Virgin Mary, saves the world behind the scenes and saves the world. It is boring and uninteresting.
I just want to say that I leveled up directly without practicing any exercises or anything like that, and no one noticed the abnormality of the protagonist. Level 1 in one day, and everyone became smarter.
The author is so bad at math. There are errors everywhere in the same chapter, let alone several chapters. It is full of errors.
Why does it feel so difficult to read😜
Featured in 2 Booklists
Official(2)
Recommendation index: ⭐⭐⭐ Curiosity index: ⭐ Poison point index: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ The protagonist starts off as a jailer on the first floor of the prison. The Xiti system provides the protagonist with experience based on their cultivation level, crime level, and the protagonist's level of participation in the prison, which can be used to add points. You can also view the crime videos of prisoners who have participated in the detention. Prisoners who die will lose experience and skills. The protagonist also often talks about being low-key and stubborn, and takes advantage of the detention rate of high-level prisoners, showing his obscene development. The author repeatedly emphasizes that the human race in the different world is controlled by aristocratic families, and that the people at the bottom have no way out, so he adds a red mission to the protagonist. The positioning and formula of the novel are the common simple and refreshing novels. The overall rhythm is okay and can attract people. ########## Single Master Poison Review########## Bai Wen is like going to the vegetable market and choosing a few common ingredients to make a dish. There is nothing wrong with the ingredients and combinations in this article, but when it is made, it smells good and tastes good, but after eating it and savoring it, it turns off your appetite. Personal objections: First of all, it is very watery and the amount of information is very low. I like copying and pasting panel descriptions and custom settings. I only have a few fights and I have to look at the special effects from all angles for a long time. There is so much nonsense. Secondly, they talk about being low-key and humble, but do high-profile things. It's so easy to just keep on growing, so why not do something that doesn't exist, delay growth, and win? In fact, it is also a cool style of writing to hang out and hang out. If you want to hang out, just be a little more arrogant. You won't die anyway, but at least you feel good when you hang out. Strike hard at the weak and experienced babies. You've already been tricked, you're tied up in Novice Village, being dragged along by ants and grasshoppers, and you're still playing tricks with them? The target is set up. I'll give you the knife. Can you practice my positioning here? Girl, lie down, why don't you open your browser to practice your skills and take notes? Again, I love painting cakes, what a talent🤙🤙🤙 Finally, if you don't know how to take photos of red tasks, don't write them down. #################### Oh my gosh~ I'm afraid I've added a tortoise shell even if I add a few points, and even a person can make you feel disgusted. Then you just keep a small notebook, fill it with water first, and then talk about the rest when you remember it? Others rely on each exciting point to attract readers, but you rely on accumulating depressing points to increase sunk costs for readers. It's amazing👍🏻 I can't bear it anymore, the really important plot is at the level of elementary school students playing house. Hang on for a while
The main character travels through time and becomes a prison jailer, Gou Daowen. Personally, I think it's good. It's a very fresh and updated novel with a lot of foreshadowing and a good sense of anticipation. I'm currently following the latest chapter. When I saw the author said it was discontinued, I remembered that I still have a book list, so I just pushed it. Recommendation index:⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
You Might Also Like
Reborn Female General
Qianshan Tea Guest
Invincibility Begins with Sacrificing the Ancestor
Xia Junji
The End of the World: Infinite Evolution Starting from Adding Points
Pig Xiaoxiao
Pushing Martial Arts Horizontally: Starting with the Turtle Breathing Technique
Mo Yiguan
Simulation of All Things: Copper Skin and Iron Bones at the Beginning
Buddha Does Not Save
Top Comprehension: Start with Basic Boxing Techniques
Moon Bardo
Martial Arts Begins with the Art of Visualizing Turtle Breath Breathing
My Demon Chooses Li Bai
My Strength Increases by 100 Pounds Every Day
Jianghu Fengchenke
Cross-promoting Martial Arts: Obtain the Dragon-elephant Prajna Skill at the Beginning
Lin Cheng Xiaolangjun
The Martial Arts of Longevity Begins with the Scribe
Qingyun Goes Straight Up