Zhetian: in the Age of Mythology, I, Pangu, Opened the Sky and Enlightened Me

The author Emperor Zun should be the last Tianzun in the mythological period. Moreover, when the Annihilation Tianzun followed the righteous path, there was no Emperor Zun. Maybe the Emperor Zun was not even born in his first life. Even if there was an Emperor of this period, he would not be called Emperor, and he did not create Heaven. Wasn't Heaven just created at the end of the myth? It just feels like the timeline is a bit messy. Hope you can sort it out. Other content can also be written. If the timeline wasn't a little messed up, I feel like your book should be rated 4:5. Now, the great god Pangu has a total of three great treasures, the Jade Disc of Creation. Grade 36 Chaos Green Lotus. Sky-opening ax. You have already written the remaining two of "Open Sky Axe". In what form are you going to write them out? Finally, I hope that the author can sort it out, re-read it, sort it out, and look for information. Check the timeline. Modify what you can. After all, it was written with your talent, and it looks good. Come on, I believe your writing will get better and better in the future.

Author, you can have two subordinates, you don't have to do everything yourself. How did Pangu die? Don't say you don't know. Completely beaten by a group of people. Although they can't beat Pangu, there are still wise men who have too many persimmons. It's good to have two helpers, don't offend people too much. With Pangu Tianzun's strength, it feels like he will be able to ascend to the upper world in a short time. No need to stay in the lower realm. After all, there is nothing to write about. There is no need to follow the plot later. After all, a big boss can follow the plot to see how many people infiltrate. Also, can those who did not initiate the dark turmoil in the original work be accepted as his subordinates? Then the fairy guy you are writing now will do. Take it as a subordinate force. If you kill all those people, what plot will happen next? It will be settled directly. After all, the protagonist has traveled through time and is an old monster who has lived for so long. The strength is still so strong. Don't be so violent

In Zhetian, no matter the Great Emperor, the Ancient Emperor or the Heavenly Lord, every extra life they live does not just increase their life span. There should also be a kind of sublimation of oneself, which is sublimating in the direction of immortality again and again, and sublimating once more for every additional life until the ninth life. In this book, the protagonist's performance of the Sixth Reincarnation is somewhat unsatisfactory. To kill two supreme beings who killed themselves once, they had to come to the scene with the immortal weapon Pangu Ax and were beaten to death twice. You want to say that it is okay for these two supreme beings to work together to resist the protagonist with immortal weapons for two hits before being killed, or that In the Mythical Forbidden Land, after killing the two supreme beings with the immortal weapon Pangu Ax across hundreds of millions of miles, the Immortal Emperor wanted to snatch the source. However, the protagonist stopped him through the air and the Immortal Emperor saw no reason to escape and ran away. When the protagonist arrived, he found that he could no longer catch up with the Immortal Emperor, so he took away the Origin and returned to the Mythical Forbidden Land. Personal thoughts, if you don't like it, pretend I didn't say it

Give the author a suggestion. Organize the timeline of the trilogy better. There are not only nine Heavenly Lords in the Mythical Age, but they are just a few. Don't mess up the Emperor's timeline. The same Heavenly Lords cannot coexist in that era. It's just that the Emperor can make some counterfeit nine-turn large intestines to restore the guy who cut himself into the restricted area. It should be about a thousand years. Pay attention to the timeline of some important emperors/emperors in the sky. The Immortal Emperor should be at the beginning/the old six divine emperors should be in the early stage/two human emperors, one in the early stage and one in the middle stage/the awesome character Demon Emperor in the later stage/the end of the monkey. If I remember correctly, it should be these important characters.

The writing is indeed not very good. After reading it, the timeline is messed up and the characters' dialogues make people want to pick their feet. It's so embarrassing! To be honest, it's normal for newbies to understand.

Not very good, it insulted Pangu's body and bloodline

The protagonist's strength is 100 times worse than Ye Fan's just after he attained enlightenment. It's difficult to defeat both of them. In order to survive, he has to give up the origin of the imperial path and swallow it to Emperor Zun. Is this still the body of Pangu? Other people's Holy Body is completed = Enlightenment. Dacheng + Enlightenment, as long as you don't go back and live a few lives, a group of people will be like little Karami

Indeed, your Pangu bloodline is a bit weak. Even in the prehistoric world, those ordinary wizards are still in the realm of human immortals and above. It seems that there are no mortals in the Wu Clan. The lowest level seems to be human immortals and above. During the prehistoric period, it seemed that the person with the lowest bloodline was the Golden Immortal. Those who are born with heels seem to be in the early stage of the Great Luo Jinxian. Hey, what a mess you did. It takes a lot of effort to hit a mortal,

Is this discrediting the Pangu bloodline? Is that so? Pangu's bloodline belongs to the level of ancestral witches. The natural control law suppresses it too hard😐

Trash, return it to Pangu Tianzun? Such rubbish, how can he be called Pangu Tianzun if he has no strength! No strength and no brains! Does such trash deserve to be called Pangu? Still of Pangu bloodline? Garbage among garbage! Not even comparable to an ordinary Witch Clan bloodline, rubbish among rubbish! Are you worthy of the identity of Pangu? Pangu's power to prove the Tao is absolute power, the power of crushing. You were almost beaten to death when you started to prove the Tao. You are a waste of material and selling dog meat on the head of a sheep. It is in name only.