Perfect: Become Shi Yi's Brother at the Beginning

Perfect: Become Shi Yi's Brother at the Beginning

by Candle Light Green Shirt

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348Kwords151chapters
Latest:
Ch. 151All the Powers Gathered Together
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About This Novel

At the beginning, he traveled through time and became the biological brother of the non-existent double-eyed Shi Yi. Was it fate or was there another reason? In this world that is changing at the blink of an eye, how does he find a different path and write a new legend?

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Book Friends 20240929539_ad12mo ago

It's completely bullshit. The protagonist can't tell that he has traveled to the past at all, and nothing about the plot can be changed. It's so fucking stupid that he left the factory after Shi Ziling was defeated by King Wu, and then took a forceful move and almost destroyed himself. The Shi Ziling written by the author is also against the sky. He failed to dig out the bones, but the supreme bone was missing, and then he insisted on killing the protagonist's mother. In the original work, there was no problem in killing the mother, but the damn thing was that the bone digging was successful, so he just fought hard and killed the protagonist. All he got was enemies and he didn't care about anything. It feels like the author would have lost the plot if he didn't write the bone-digging scene😐😐😐

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Book Friend 2023011996183613mo ago

Since they are about to break up, why let them go? What is there to feel guilty about? They all knew what was going to happen in advance. With such a long time, they could go to Shi Yi's father and Demon Spirit Lake Rain Palace. The original story had Shi Ziling kill Yu Rou because he didn't know it would happen.

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烛照青衫13mo ago

Is anyone watching? Recruiting female protagonists

This comment section is asking for female protagonists. The author originally tentatively decided to have a single female protagonist: Witch. I'd like to hear your readers' opinions. If you have other favorite heroines, you can comment below.

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Space11mo ago

I hope that the five female protagonists Yuesao + Qing J + Yun Xi + Ye Qingxian + Witch

Five heroines: Yuesao + Qing J + Yun Xi + Ye Qingxian + Witch

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ღ᭄ꦿ Meet Youএ⁵²º᭄এ12mo ago

Author, do you think the child born to the protagonist and a girl with double pupils will also have double pupils? So, why don't you write the heroine as a girl with double pupils? After all, they both have double pupils, and also whether the heroine has Princess Golden Crow. And the most important thing is that I hope that the protagonist's Supreme Bone will not be given away, but that it will be transformed into his own heritage, Nirvana, and accompany the protagonist to grow step by step.

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肘你
肘你!12mo ago

After traveling through time, nothing has changed. There is an extra talented person passing through the class. The whole process is like being dumb. Nothing is solved when the human-machine hangs up.

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通天代_Cb13mo ago

Since we have to break up with Shi Ziling and Shi Hao in the end, I think you should dig out Shi Hao's supreme bone, otherwise the protagonist's mother will be punished in vain

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Night of Mourning~12mo ago

So disgusting

The book I wrote is really disgusting, and there are no human beings in the book review section. I hope you children will be beaten to death by then, but you are lucky enough to survive. I will give you some compensation. I can't hold my head up.

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Nothing_de12mo ago

Might as well be reincarnated somewhere else

Nothing changes after time travel, and it's not like you don't know that the protagonist of the plot has memories. If you know that such a thing happens, you can just tell him in advance or find some support, so you just pretend to block Shi Ziling's attack? Not to mention how the protagonist of the original work was, his mother's cultivation was ruined, and the whole family was shattered. What's the point of writing this?

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Bloody Cherry Blossoms11mo ago

Absolutely, the way I dug out the bones is really disgusting. No. 10'S bones were dug out a little bit, damaging the foundation. The protagonist happened to have double pupils and supreme bones. I thought the author arranged to come here to compensate the couple from the beginning, and then changed the sentence "Double pupils are the way to be invincible" and said, In the end, the author pulled a big deal and used the power of the Supreme Bone and the Double Eyes to block Shi Ziling's blow... The main character was hit because the main character just came up and shouted "Mom" at the critical moment. I was a little speechless.

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