Zhe Tian: Rebirth of Emperor Ye Tian's Sister

A description of the main character's male-to-female beauty is enough. If it's too much, it's not good. After all, it's a man who transformed. Using a quarter to describe each chapter is too deliberate.

Is this a novel that a male channel should have? Not only is it a man turning into a woman, but he is also pretending to be a woman. Half of the content in the first few chapters is describing the beauty of various protagonists😋 I think a man, even if he becomes a woman, will not take his appearance too seriously

It would be more interesting if the protagonist didn't follow the invincible style... It would be more interesting to share the difficulties with other characters. I feel that the combat power will probably collapse if I write it down later.

I haven't even finished writing this yet, so I'm going to start a new book on Eunuch?

Author: Is this article Lily?

Can there be more? This is simply not enough.

For this kind of fantasy, it doesn't matter if it's a hundred, just teasing is enough. As long as you know what it means, it's a hundred. Don't describe it in too much detail. I'll pretend I didn't see it.

I'm about to test the waters. It's still a niche transformation article. I ask for your support. If you don't like it, don't criticize me. It's just one-sided. If you have any opinions and ideas, you can also mention them. I will refer to them if they are reasonable (^_^)/

It's long-winded, so long-winded. Many of the plots in the original novel can be skipped in one go. It's written in too much detail. Also, although there is a Voldemort system in the setting, and the protagonist also likes his brother Ye Fan very much, there are too many descriptions. If the author hadn't said it was a change of fortune, I would have thought it was a change of marriage. I just came because I wanted to read Tie Tie. In the end, I felt that there were more plots about Ye Fan than Tie Tie. When I was watching it, I still had the illusion that Ye Fan was the protagonist. It wasn't that serious, but I had this feeling while watching it, which led to a bad viewing experience. Also, is the author really a man? It gave me a feeling that I particularly liked Ye Fan, either because of the other person's personality, or like the person you were marrying. Anyway, it gives me the feeling of jumping back and forth between changing and marrying. Author, you'd better pick one and rewrite it. It's not good to jump back and forth. Write less when describing appearance, and use less adjectives. If you don't know, you might think it's an AI, how can you be so good at it? When I was writing, it was a bit logical. I don't know if the author had an outline. It felt like he was trying to write it out one after another. It was too uncomfortable and confusing. There are also things like time travellers, heavens and worlds. It's best to have something to draw out, don't just jump out at once, it's really uncomfortable to watch. The writing style is not like a male video, it has the feeling of a female video, which seems awkward anyway. All in all, the writing style needs to be improved, it's not very good. I really want to read the posts and write them. This is what keeps me from giving up.

The author's pace is too slow and the various adjectives are too wordy. Come on!