Dream Maker

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Ever since I got into the food trap, I have been looking forward to the author's updates every day. Every time I read it, my mouth watered . Now the author has opened a new book. I read it because I wanted to gain weight. But I didn't expect that I fell into the pit after reading the beginning and could never get up again! Big boost, author↖(^ω^)↗I will continue to follow your books, they are so good! ! !

As soon as the protagonist is born, his parents must die first. My talents are astounding from ancient times to the present, and I can do everything. There was a fiancée who came to break off the engagement. If you go out to study art, you will definitely have the opportunity. There must be a story about becoming a disciple of someone so-and-so, and being a disciple was jealous of others, and all the senior brothers were dissatisfied. The protagonist is slapped in the face, and the senior sister comes to help. Advise him to be patient for a while, and a chance will come. As magical weapons and magical skills come, so must the magical beasts. Once the magical skill is mastered, the enemy will appear. The two of them are like fire and water, and someone must come to persuade them. The sect held a grand competition and got the top three in revenge. The master invites me to meet you and go out to travel around the world. There are beauties in the world, and beauties have troubles. The protagonist comes to help and the trouble is solved. Then she told her origin, she must be a daughter of aristocratic family. The family then arrives and the beauty must leave. The protagonist wants to find her, but the power gap is too great. The auction house will definitely gain something later. Then find your teammates, who are beautiful women. When you leave the city and change the map, you can get air every second. The beauty is found, and the head of the family comes to test her. There is a strong enemy in the test, and the protagonist has to solve it. After all, the clan members praised me for being so awesome. After finishing the work and returning home with beauty, the master is no longer here.

As a bookworm of 10 years, I have read so many different routines that I got tired of them and finally found a different routine! The overall picture of this book is very good, the writing is humorous, and it is a rare good book!

This book should be considered good, but it actually has too many problems, big and small. I have only read part of it, and I feel that the author is obviously constantly changing the structure of the novel, gradually deviating from the original main line, resulting in a complete disconnect between the beginning of the novel and the subsequent settings. Let me tell you something first. What is a slave? It is a ghost and a dream card. This setting is very failed. The author is completely unable to determine the boundary between the two. The realization of the dream card requires the consumption of perception. This is only briefly mentioned in the early stage. Of course, some people think it is the improvement of the protagonist's ability and ignore it. There are also the settings of the dream cards, the settings of the dream-eating insects, and the settings of the scare juice. These are all full of flaws. The author wrote that he didn't even know what was going on. These are the main skeleton of the novel's structure. Shouldn't there be a complete setting from the beginning? The opening cannot be introduced, but it shouldn't be forced to be set just for the protagonist. The novel originally tended to be a comedy type. In the initial stage, the protagonist lost his wits and started to transform into a pretentious and slap-in-the-face novel. Don't be like this. There are thousands of such novels. Author, can't you just go further and further down the road of comedy? Doesn't this road feel good to him? The protagonist's way of showing off has long been trampled by others. Is he good? Is it easy for him to leave? I've criticized it a lot, but I still have to say that I've only read part of the novel, and overall it's quite funny. It has a good initial main line. Although it's some content we've seen, it's also a rare oddity in the novel.

Come to the bookstore and take a dip, as if you heard someone praising you for being handsome~(?0?7▽`?0?6?7?9?0?0)

Rating first, I will give you five points. Come on, I hope the author will not disappoint the readers ὡE, hehehe!

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Author, you are very powerful. Do you know why I say you are very experienced? Because each of your books has a different style. One is about a martial arts master, another is about a chef, and what is this one about? It's like being a nightmare maker. Your book is different from dark literature... It actually uses nightmares to frighten others to gain benefits, while dark literature obtains benefits through extremes (you have all read dark literature, and you all understand what I mean by using extremes to gain benefits, extreme). The style of a good book is really different. I feel that if your book is better than Gourmet, this book may wish you to become a god! So! Lao Li, please don't live up to my expectations of you PS: Dear readers, if you think what I said is good and correct, please like + comment Hey? I didn't ask you to give me likes and comments. I didn't, don't lie. . . [Emot=default,52/]