Douluo: Burning Jue at the Beginning, but Was Relied on by Ma Xiaotao

No, no, author, author, let me recommend a few heroines to you.

The author confused me. When did Tang Ya sell barbecue? The original work is about Huo Yuhao selling grilled fish, and Tang Ya sometimes helped sell it. When did Mu En sleep for a hundred years to recuperate, and let's not talk about sleeping to recuperate, why did he have to sleep again, in Huo When Yuhao entered school, Mu En was basking in the sun in front of the student dormitory, and Tang Ya reached level 35 not long after absorbing the soul ring, and Beibei was promoted to the soul sect too quickly. I remember that in the original book, Beibei was not even level 39 at this time. Moreover, the protagonist does not know the original work, and does not know the situation of Wang Donger and Rui Shou, which makes people feel very passive. Nowadays, fans generally like to read the protagonist who knows the original work. I don't know if the author hasn't read the original work or even the fanfic. After all, he made a lot of common sense mistakes. However, the subject matter of this book is good. If the author wants to write another book that can be used continuously, it is best to add a system to assist. If the author does not like the system, the system's presence can be lower and it can just give the protagonist some help at critical moments. The author should also know more about the original work and not deviate too much from the original work when writing a play. Come on!

Be sure to remember to collect: (Ye Xishui) Soul Beasts: Gu Yuena, Ah Yin, Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, Auspicious Beast. Wang Qiu'er, Zi Ji, Demon Emperor, Lan Fuzi, Xiao Bai, Bai Xiuxiu, Sea Princess, Mermaid Princess Lijing, Mermaid Princess Liya Shrek: Ma Xiaotao Jiang Nannan Zhang Lexuan Hibiscus Zhou Yi Xian Lin'er Cai Meier Ning Tian Wu Feng Ling Luochen Tang Ya (two souls of Wang Dong'er and Tang Wutong) Xiaoxiao Nanmen Yuner Han Nuonuo Zhu Lu Cui Yajie Lan Susu Lan Luoluo Wu Ming Ling Xue Others: Nan Qiuqiu, Nan Shuishui, Xixi, Meng Hongchen, Orange, Xu Jiujiu, Ye Guyi, Qingya, An Lengye, Nana, Shangguan Wei'er, Wei Na, Ke Ke, Mu Xue, Feng Ling, Xu Tianzhen, Xue Qingli, Xue Lingxun, Zhu Qinyun (Duchess), Goddess of Life, Goddess of Kindness, First Angel God, Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong, Xiao Wu, Ice God.

What is the main plot line? Does the author have an outline? The writing also seems to be about writing whatever comes to mind. Is the author a student?

Come on, author, I hope your writing will get better and better, and more and more people will read it.

I recommend it to many women who have given birth and come to see it.

Is this a stoppage of updates? No, not even 100...

The plot develops like the author sleepwalking The author even wrote it even though he knew it was poisonous.

What does this book say? First, it's just random writing. Second, a lot of private settings have been added. Third, the time traveler doesn't know the plot. I only read one chapter and there were so many problems that I didn't feel like reading any more. They all have three golden chapters, so I won't let you read even one of them. It's very impressive.

This author is pure☁️ and has never read the original work. He keeps making all kinds of mistakes. He can change the clear settings of the original work at will. Rather than saying it is a fanfic, it is more like making up in Douluo skin.