
Quanfa, Your Magic is Not Quite Right, is It?
by Qian Hao
About This Novel
[Honkai] [Full-time Mage] [Single heroine Mu Nujiao] [Each magic has its own natural talent] What is it like to learn magic instead of knowledge? Jingyuan traveled to the world of a full-time mage. Awakening the thunder system for the first time, if you tell me what is behind me, you can call him [Shenxiao Lei Mansion Chief, Driving Thunder, Pursuing Demons and Sweeping Evil Heavenly Lord]. If it is too long to remember, you can call him [Shenjun! Awakening the unearthed magic for the second time, huh? This magic is wrong. Li Changsheng, who can cast magic, looked at the shield in front of him and fell into deep thought⊙⊙: Am I the Emperor of the Rock King? The third wind element, soaring in the sky, I am the real Herrscher of Wind! ...
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Official(16)Scraped 5d ago
I like the female character Mu Nujiao very much, so I gave it a five-star review before I watched it. But after reading it, I felt inexplicable. What is the emotional basis for confessing? You can like him, you can chase him. Mu Nujiao in the original novel is warlike, and if you are better than him, he might have a crush on you. But I find it strange that there is no intersection with Jiaojiao at all. There was a little intersection in the beast fighting competition, and then after two or three confessions, others agreed. Oh my god.
Update quickly, don't stop updating, keep updating.
It's so embarrassing, Mr. Shenjun, please help me.
Aren't you embarrassed? Help me, Mr. Shenjun, if you could remove this and replace it with Huanghuang Weiling, follow my order and kill this.
A lot of details are wrong. I feel like you didn't understand the original work. I've read so many of them and I've never heard of Class 13.
The author is not good enough, please update quickly.
The author's main character, the thunder type, has a divine king, so it's normal for the main character, the wind type, to have a copy of the fox in the iron-breaking sky, right?
I read Chapter 31. I have just entered university and am already at a high level. I can't stand it anymore. I glanced at the front and didn't even notice that Mu Nujiao had been obtained.
Thoughts: 8 points, Goldfinger's idea is very good, and the preface is quite attractive. Writing style: 6 points. I always feel that it is a bit too dry and the characters are a bit flat. If it continues to be like this later, I feel it will be lowered. Plot direction: combined with the comments, plus I currently feel that it is 5 points. If you feel good later, you can add a little more, but it is indeed a bit old, a bit like watching a fanfic from three years ago. Sense of anticipation: 8 points after reading the preface, 6 points after reading the first chapter, and 5 points after reading the comments. If it is true to what the comments say, I will probably just skip reading it in the future.
Generally speaking, the lines are quite average and have no special characteristics, just flowing writing.
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Official(16)Scraped 5d ago
I like the female character Mu Nujiao very much, so I gave it a five-star review before I watched it. But after reading it, I felt inexplicable. What is the emotional basis for confessing? You can like him, you can chase him. Mu Nujiao in the original novel is warlike, and if you are better than him, he might have a crush on you. But I find it strange that there is no intersection with Jiaojiao at all. There was a little intersection in the beast fighting competition, and then after two or three confessions, others agreed. Oh my god.
Update quickly, don't stop updating, keep updating.
It's so embarrassing, Mr. Shenjun, please help me.
Aren't you embarrassed? Help me, Mr. Shenjun, if you could remove this and replace it with Huanghuang Weiling, follow my order and kill this.
A lot of details are wrong. I feel like you didn't understand the original work. I've read so many of them and I've never heard of Class 13.
The author is not good enough, please update quickly.
The author's main character, the thunder type, has a divine king, so it's normal for the main character, the wind type, to have a copy of the fox in the iron-breaking sky, right?
I read Chapter 31. I have just entered university and am already at a high level. I can't stand it anymore. I glanced at the front and didn't even notice that Mu Nujiao had been obtained.
Thoughts: 8 points, Goldfinger's idea is very good, and the preface is quite attractive. Writing style: 6 points. I always feel that it is a bit too dry and the characters are a bit flat. If it continues to be like this later, I feel it will be lowered. Plot direction: combined with the comments, plus I currently feel that it is 5 points. If you feel good later, you can add a little more, but it is indeed a bit old, a bit like watching a fanfic from three years ago. Sense of anticipation: 8 points after reading the preface, 6 points after reading the first chapter, and 5 points after reading the comments. If it is true to what the comments say, I will probably just skip reading it in the future.
Generally speaking, the lines are quite average and have no special characteristics, just flowing writing.









