
The Land of Dragons
by Lin Xi
About This Novel
Lying awake in a swamp, surrounded by four wolves. On the golden battlefield, the beauty is in my arms. Laughing and talking about world affairs, the floating clouds are floating on the willows. The sword points to the heaven and the earth, and the universe will follow my path. Let's see, after the Yama people's prophecy was confirmed, Tang Mian cried out his unwillingness, but due to luck, he traveled to the ancient earth. There are humanoid monsters that are 100 meters high, warriors who can take the heads of people from thousands of miles away, mages who can walk proudly in the sky, vampires who only live for blood, and powerful demonic beasts. The name here is - Panlong Land.
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Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
There are too many typos, no foreshadowing, no excessiveness, poor cohesion, and too many abrupt places. It may be because the author is too immersed in his own world and has not considered how to attract the reader's attention, how to guide the development of the following, and how to carry out his thoughts layer by layer to the end. There's a long way to go, come on!
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Official(4)Scraped 11d ago
There are too many typos, no foreshadowing, no excessiveness, poor cohesion, and too many abrupt places. It may be because the author is too immersed in his own world and has not considered how to attract the reader's attention, how to guide the development of the following, and how to carry out his thoughts layer by layer to the end. There's a long way to go, come on!
Please reply when received [smile]
Passing by. . . . . . . .











