There is a Fairy World in My House

I would like to remind the author. From now on, write less about life in books. These are philosophical questions. I see that in the last few chapters, the protagonist has been struggling with philosophical issues such as what life is, what he should do in the future, and how to deal with his family. To be honest, these are the questions for those who specialize in philosophy. Can't even tell. Can I say 1234 on this issue? They can all be leaders in the literary world. As an online novelist, just stop worrying about these issues. I've seen you get all these embarrassing cancers. These are controversial topics. It's uncomfortable for you to wash, and it takes a lot of effort. It was painful for us to watch. There is also the suspicion of the number of water characters.

Leaving aside the writing style, there are many unreasonable aspects in the plot. Including the protagonist's thoughts. There are many rules that the protagonist must think of out of thin air. The protagonist would definitely not have thought of them, but he was forced to think of them through various unreasonable relationships. The feeling is: What? Which is related to which? Is it related? Most of the time, the protagonist's brain is in a state of paralysis, but when various plot arrangements are made, he immediately becomes Sherlock Holmes. The person who took the protagonist to be a chef in Novice Village, the protagonist was led by the nose from beginning to end and didn't feel anything was wrong. Later, if someone gives the protagonist a note, the protagonist can immediately analyze that person's conspiracy thoroughly! ? What are you thinking? Where did it come from? Forcibly lowering one's intelligence, then forcibly raising one's intelligence, and then forcibly making it reasonable? Poison, poison, poison!

At the beginning, the protagonist uses the cooking skills and pork from the high-dimensional world to defeat the low-dimensional ones. Later, the protagonist uses low-dimensional snacks to defeat the high-dimensional ones. The plot is too routine and there is no awesome character to challenge the protagonist, and the logic is confusing.

The book is really good! It's just that the writing is too detailed and the protagonist has too many ideas! Then the protagonist is too curious, as if everything needs to be traced to the source. It was also because I was too careful that I saw that Chapter 120 was still Level 1! It feels a bit disappointing. Summary: The concept is really good, and the good author writes it very well (I have an impatient personality after all) and I have read Chapter 120! But what about behind? Too thin will just make it feel a little watery. It's okay that it's free in the past, but what about after it's charged? With Chapter 120 at level 1, how many people will be willing to pay? At least when I read Chapter 50, I wanted to follow it until I finished it. But when I got to Chapter 120, when I went to take a drink of water, I thought about it! What's in front of it? There is really no content! Is it still worth it? I really liked it at first, but later on I was quite disappointed! Having said so much, I hope the author can think carefully! The main thing is that I love this type of novel. Good luck, author!

I don't eat any meat in the past. I can understand this. I just think that the protagonist is very cautious. Later, when he meets someone else, his IQ goes down, and he signs the contract on the spot without fear of being cheated. Just a storage ring turns the protagonist into an idiot. The subsequent portrayal of the character's psychology of whether to continue to occupy the portal is completely unnecessary and has no other use except to show that the protagonist is a greedy and stupid person. I can't stand it anymore.

I feel that the protagonist is a little out of his mind. He gives treasures to his family without showing his strong relationship. Is this using the lives of his relatives to test the conscience and bottom line of mankind?

Don't always try to make up the word count and write a lot of wasteful words.

The protagonist has so many merits. The author can try to bring in all the Buddhist scriptures on earth for the protagonist. After all, the spiritual realm will not be graded based on the level of the world.

It's okay, but it's so boring for the protagonist to have to rebuild every day! The most annoying thing is to re-edit it. Once it's re-edited, it's like you didn't read it. . .

Various loopholes in the plot in the early stage were explained later, and references can be found in many places. It was explained why the game started in the Fire Cloud Palace, why the protagonist grew up so smoothly, and the cause and effect was explained in the ending of Cheng Jinxian. The shortcoming is that it was unfinished. There was no explanation for Panic. Personally, I feel that the emperor does not have a past or a future, only the present, which is the only one.