
In the Name of Whirlpool
by Husky Fox
About This Novel
"My stupid Ou Doudou~", Uzumaki Menma, who had red hair and blue eyes, touched Naruto's head and smiled brightly. What kind of disturbance would a doctor in modern biology cause when he traveled through time and became Naruto's brother, who is also a Nine-Tailed Jinchuuriki? [New artist, new work, no system, traditional Naruto masterpiece]
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......... What the hell is this?
......... What the hell is this, old man, I'm watching a Naruto fanfic, Naruto, isn't he taking a biology class? Damn it, I can't even tell you, your homework is really solid, you are not suitable for writing this, you are suitable for a paper,
Is this name poisonous? , I thought I could pay attention to it, but the name makes it boring.
author
You have a lot of content in it, which is very different from the original version. The first one is that when Naruto was born, the shadow of Kirigakure Village in the Kingdom of Water was already controlled by Ban with his Sharingan. Terumi Nobu's coup occurred a year before Naruto entered the ninja school. Also, Kimimaro followed Orochimaru the year after Naruto was born, because he left Konoha in the year when he failed to elect the Fourth Hokage.
It was fine at first, but in the end, he wanted to take Ming Mei into his harem? ?
Author, as long as you change the plot, I will give you five stars🙏
Well written
The plot has a sense of design, and every step is very reasonable. It doesn't have that compact and random feeling, but the timeline feels too slow and could be pulled back a little.
Niubi Niubi
This book is quite similar to being adopted by Tsunade in the beginning.
In the name of the whirlpool book club
QQ group number: 513391002 All readers are welcome to join the discussion!
Rating
Community(0)
Official(35)
......... What the hell is this?
......... What the hell is this, old man, I'm watching a Naruto fanfic, Naruto, isn't he taking a biology class? Damn it, I can't even tell you, your homework is really solid, you are not suitable for writing this, you are suitable for a paper,
Is this name poisonous? , I thought I could pay attention to it, but the name makes it boring.
author
You have a lot of content in it, which is very different from the original version. The first one is that when Naruto was born, the shadow of Kirigakure Village in the Kingdom of Water was already controlled by Ban with his Sharingan. Terumi Nobu's coup occurred a year before Naruto entered the ninja school. Also, Kimimaro followed Orochimaru the year after Naruto was born, because he left Konoha in the year when he failed to elect the Fourth Hokage.
It was fine at first, but in the end, he wanted to take Ming Mei into his harem? ?
Author, as long as you change the plot, I will give you five stars🙏
Well written
The plot has a sense of design, and every step is very reasonable. It doesn't have that compact and random feeling, but the timeline feels too slow and could be pulled back a little.
Niubi Niubi
This book is quite similar to being adopted by Tsunade in the beginning.
In the name of the whirlpool book club
QQ group number: 513391002 All readers are welcome to join the discussion!
















