Swallowing the Starry Sky: Coming to the Krypton Life Panel in His Later Years

8 points for Golden Finger, 7 points for the plot, 8 points for the writing and emotional foreshadowing, but the plot is written so that the reader's emotions cannot be released. 7 Points, and the handling of the matter is 5 points. At the beginning, the whole family was almost wiped out, but the revenge ended up being lonely. This is really stupid. You have to obey the orders of Hong and Thor? Did your family die in vain? If you want to write about revenge, you need to increase the combat power so that Goldfinger can crush Hong. If you just give a planetary ninth-level nutrient solution, I won't say anything. The high-profile revenge also brings the thunder and lightning field, but Hong will leave in despair with just one sentence? It's really useless. We are both in the planet-level realm. You, the Golden Finger Kryptonian Planet, are at the same level as the sixth-level. Are you afraid that he will be a fool? The result was that I had saved Hong and Lei Shen before. Who would save you when your whole family was about to die? This wave of emotions is really inappropriate if you don't leave everyone in the Wang family alone. It would be strange if readers don't scold you. You have to go to see him like a lapdog after just one word from him? He is really written like a god. A planet-level sixth-level person who has spent so many years has only reached the first level of light. He has an infinite heart every day. He is just a thing on the roadside when he comes out of the universe. What kind of person can be seen from the treatment of Luo Feng's No. 9 Ruins in the original work. With Luo Feng's contribution, even his family is not protected. How can he still boast about the extreme martial arts gym? The planes bought with real money can be recycled and even have secret doors. Hong is essentially a cold-blooded killer. When he is worthless, he can't even provide safety protection. From the Nirvana to the rise of Luo Feng, Hong is a hero. From the beginning of the universe chapter, it has been the biggest disaster for mankind on earth. The initiator, Ji Qing, treated Luo Feng as a Japanese. Later, he broke into the 21st floor of the illusion sea and caused misery to all the people on earth. As a result, he became a disciple of the giant axe and got the maximum hidden benefit, pushing Luo Feng to the front to resist the pressure. In the later stage, he became a real god and could be said to eat human blood steamed buns until his mouth was full of oil.

The poison was released at the beginning... The planet's first-order belt realm could not defeat the planet's second-order warrior. It was a life-saving grace for Hong and Lei Shen, but it did not help at all and prevented revenge...

I haven't read it yet. If I remember correctly, the planets that swallow the stars will live for thousands of years, while the stars will live for ten thousand years.

In the plot of Silly Bird, the protagonist's domain was shattered by a second-level planetary level warrior. A first-level planetary spiritual master with domain blessing fought against a second-level planetary level warrior, and was repulsed. He said that the warrior's cultivation level has not broken through to the planetary level, and the system is still there for a month. Have you gone to eat? No breakthrough. Did the author never read the original novel or even watch the anime, so he just came here and wrote blindly?

The plot was poorly written and the logic was even more broken. The previous ones were passable because of the explanations, but there was a problem with the one from Tuoba Wu. It showed that the protagonist had saved Hong and Lei Shen, and Hong and Lei Shen also cared about the protagonist. However, when the Wang family took action, Hong and Lei Shen did not come forward to help. This was very speechless, and the penalty was also biased towards carelessness.

There's something wrong with the Goldfinger setting. If you kill someone to become immortal, doesn't that mean you have a permanent lifespan?

As a newcomer, I am very grateful to everyone for reading my book. I don't know why the author's words cannot be displayed on QReader 😂 So I posted it in the book circle. Everyone has some opinions on why the Wang family dared to ignore the country, even the existence of Hong, and the bottom line, and brazenly used force and even killed people in the base city. I thought about the logic of this when I was conceiving the plot. From the Wang family's perspective, they learned that the protagonist's eldest son had obtained the Muji Crystal, which is a treasure that can break through to the planet level. In order to prevent the protagonist from breaking through, two teams of experts were arranged, and one team went to the wilderness area to intercept it. Mu Yajing and a team went to the Zhou family to find the protagonist to sabotage his breakthrough and even kill him. For this purpose, they also hired an invincible war god with a planet-level brother, because the Wang family knew that once Zhou Mu broke through, they would not let them go even with Zhou Mu's character based on their previous tricks. Either way, death is inevitable. As a big family in the HR Alliance, the Wang family certainly has the courage to send a team of dead men to the Zhou family to exterminate the family. Afterwards, they can introduce a few scapegoats, but they may not even alert Hong to suppress the matter. They even thought that Zhou Mu would be more likely to die from old age than he would succeed in breaking through. To avoid having long nights and dreams, they didn't dare to gamble, so they still did what I wrote, but they didn't expect that Zhou Mu would cheat hhhh, which directly frustrated their plan. In my opinion, the logic here should make sense. Thank you very much for your opinions. If you have any opinions on the plot, I welcome your opinions. This is the first book I have written, and I will try my best to let everyone see wonderful stories~ Thank you again to every reader~~~😽

The plot is too historical. You are about to be exterminated, and then you give up on revenge when others ask you to. What is in your mind, author, that you can write such a plot?