Swallowing the Starry Sky: Coming to the Krypton Life Panel in His Later Years

8 points for Golden Finger, 7 points for the plot, 8 points for the writing and emotional foreshadowing, but the plot is written so that the reader's emotions cannot be released. 7 Points, and the handling of the matter is 5 points. At the beginning, the whole family was almost wiped out, but the revenge ended up being lonely. This is really stupid. You have to obey the orders of Hong and Thor? Did your family die in vain? If you want to write about revenge, you need to increase the combat power so that Goldfinger can crush Hong. If you just give a planetary ninth-level nutrient solution, I won't say anything. The high-profile revenge also brings the thunder and lightning field, but Hong will leave in despair with just one sentence? It's really useless. We are both in the planet-level realm. You, the Golden Finger Kryptonian Planet, are at the same level as the sixth-level. Are you afraid that he will be a fool? The result was that I had saved Hong and Lei Shen before. Who would save you when your whole family was about to die? This wave of emotions is really inappropriate if you don't leave everyone in the Wang family alone. It would be strange if readers don't scold you. You have to go to see him like a lapdog after just one word from him? He is really written like a god. A planet-level sixth-level person who has spent so many years has only reached the first level of light. He has an infinite heart every day. He is just a thing on the roadside when he comes out of the universe. What kind of person can be seen from the treatment of Luo Feng's No. 9 Ruins in the original work. With Luo Feng's contribution, even his family is not protected. How can he still boast about the extreme martial arts gym? The planes bought with real money can be recycled and even have secret doors. Hong is essentially a cold-blooded killer. When he is worthless, he can't even provide safety protection. From the Nirvana to the rise of Luo Feng, Hong is a hero. From the beginning of the universe chapter, it has been the biggest disaster for mankind on earth. The initiator, Ji Qing, treated Luo Feng as a Japanese. Later, he broke into the 21st floor of the illusion sea and caused misery to all the people on earth. As a result, he became a disciple of the giant axe and got the maximum hidden benefit, pushing Luo Feng to the front to resist the pressure. In the later stage, he became a real god and could be said to eat human blood steamed buns until his mouth was full of oil.

The poison was released at the beginning... The planet's first-order belt realm could not defeat the planet's second-order warrior. It was a life-saving grace for Hong and Lei Shen, but it did not help at all and prevented revenge...

The plot is too historical. You are about to be exterminated, and then you give up on revenge when others ask you to. What is in your mind, author, that you can write such a plot?

In the plot of Silly Bird, the protagonist's domain was shattered by a second-level planetary level warrior. A first-level planetary spiritual master with domain blessing fought against a second-level planetary level warrior, and was repulsed. He said that the warrior's cultivation level has not broken through to the planetary level, and the system is still there for a month. Have you gone to eat? No breakthrough. Did the author never read the original novel or even watch the anime, so he just came here and wrote blindly?

I haven't read it yet. If I remember correctly, the planets that swallow the stars will live for thousands of years, while the stars will live for ten thousand years.

The plot was poorly written and the logic was even more broken. The previous ones were passable because of the explanations, but there was a problem with the one from Tuoba Wu. It showed that the protagonist had saved Hong and Lei Shen, and Hong and Lei Shen also cared about the protagonist. However, when the Wang family took action, Hong and Lei Shen did not come forward to help. This was very speechless, and the penalty was also biased towards carelessness.

It's a big poison at the beginning. Mumbling to myself will get zero points. Normal people can't mutter to themselves, let alone swallowing the stars and going back in time.

This is the most disgusting Devouring fanfic I have ever seen. Your plug-in settings are so outrageous that they overwhelm most fan fiction. What are you talking about? The golden-horned behemoth is Luo Feng's biggest and most irreplaceable opportunity on earth. Without the golden-horned behemoth, what would Babata think of Luo Feng? Without the golden-horned behemoth, Luo Feng couldn't even touch the door of Virtual Universe Company, let alone be noticed by the mountain guest. To put it bluntly, Luo Feng is a typical growth protagonist, and the starting point of his rise is the golden-horned beast. Without the golden-horned behemoth, whether Luo Feng can reach the threshold of immortality is a question. Do you really think that this is a prehistoric article, that one certificate will last forever and one step will reach the sky? Stop it. Luo Feng is missing the most crucial part and is essentially just a passerby. Why, being a licking dog in reality is not enough, and you have to continue being a licker after traveling to the star-devouring sky? If it doesn't work, you might as well change the name of your book - "Crossing the Swallowing Starry Sky: I Abandoned My Wife and Son to Become a Dog". 😎😎😎

We already have a system, but it's so frustrating to write about it. Why don't you just write about women's videos instead of men's videos?

Thanks for trying the poison, no need to waste everyone's time