Milo Blue Scroll

The beginning is quite fairy-like, but after about one or two copies, it becomes a fast-food article, with a strong flavor of popular elements and templates. If you don't mind this, it's a good piece of food. Anyway, I haven't finished reading any of it, and once I put it down, I won't be able to pick it up again.

Why do I feel so tired?

The first ten or so chapters are very well written, with a fairy-tale atmosphere, but as they go on, they start to diverge and start to talk about some things that are not there, which completely destroys the original fairy-tale atmosphere. There are dungeons, cooking skills, etc., And it feels more and more like a light novel, and there is no such classic fairy-tale flavor. , Try to write as little as possible about that kind of thing, I just skip that kind of thing, just like cooking, talking about how delicious this dish is, talking about the ingredients themselves, but praising how good the ingredients are instead of writing about how delicious the dish is, on the contrary, no one cares about how good the dish is, the ingredients outweigh the dish

It's too bland. It's okay at the beginning, but the more I read later, the more confused I become. There is no theme and I don't know what I'm looking at. After reading it, it seems like I'm not reading it. And it's better to just leave it here. If it were another type of book, your writing method would be 100% in a water-character book, with a bunch of setting introductions but no prominent plot, and no main storyline, so it would be quite satisfactory.

Is the author great? After finishing the Three Purities, I started writing the Jade Emperor, the Head of the Six Imperial Guards.

The main character is too much of a virgin bitch, I don't want to see you sympathizing with others, but you have to be educated and brainwashed after reading a ** novel, it's really a piece of shit

I watched it from Baolu, and Yuchen also watched it a little bit.

It's a very old-fashioned novel with very old formulas.

Um. . I prefer to read classical fairy tales, but this book is well written with a modern twist. If someone else writes it, it won't have the same effect. It's okay. I can accept this book.

What kind of rubbish novel is this? It's too ridiculous. It's better to write about urban immortality. On the one hand, it writes about the technologicalization of immortality, and on the other hand, it writes about the stupidity and ignorance of human nature.