Madam, Help Me, the General is in Trouble Again

1. The male protagonist is a general. I don't see his military talents. At this stage, I only know that he is a psychopath. He gets angry inexplicably, kills people inexplicably, and cannot recognize the female protagonist inexplicably? Do you suspect that the heroine's man is a spy, but you can't even investigate her family to find out? A lame brother and a silly sister. Are there many families like this in a county? I can't recognize it forcibly. Including the male protagonist's subordinates, there is no clear image, anyone can be used when it needs to be funny. 2. It's hard to say whether the heroine is a normal person. She doesn't feel any discomfort at all, even if she kills people. She adapts well. The male protagonist gives her status as a subordinate, but it's hard to tell, but she still insists on not being suspicious. 3. This is also the most unbearable point for me. Except for the heroine, the female characters currently appearing are either love-minded or brainless provocative. The one selling animal skins wants the heroine to slap passers-by in the face to create a sense of fun. It is really disgusting that a female herbal picker pops up and becomes a clown. Obviously the Orion next to her questioned it at that time. 4. Including the two identities of the heroine, the author neither wants to give up the convenience of a man in this feudal society, nor does he want to delay the heroine's bad idea of ​​getting married and having a romantic drama. Is there no doubt that these two people (both short and dark) must have a visit to relatives? This whole book is full of the heroine's unique and sexy tricks, which is really speechless. 5. The purpose of including the feeling setting is to emphasize the dominant position of craftsmen. Is it difficult for women to become excellent craftsmen? That Gongsun Lan can obviously be a shining point, even if he and the heroine are already in love with each other, how can he be good at it? It has to be a love brain who causes trouble for her brother For the sake of some comedy, the character's image is completely blurred, isn't it putting the cart before the horse?

To be honest, after reading the two words, I was angry ~ I felt that the people in the book seemed to have lost their minds when it came to the heroine changing her identity... Furthermore, if the heroine had just come back and had no memory, why was she not at all defensive against those who wanted to harm her? The article said that I wouldn't believe it, but every time I met Shan Bian and that Qiu, why didn't I strike first when I knew someone was watching? Even though you have weapons, you can resist but you don't know how to resist. Why can't you find a chance to resist? I don't believe it... Shan Bian has never asked about this person in a village, and he doesn't pay attention to other people's movements. He knows what the heroine is thinking. There are also several times when the heroine has a conversation with Wei Yao and Shan Bian or Qiu appears late. Why is she still so careless? Have you never doubted that Shan Bian can actually do martial arts? Otherwise, how could he hide in front of a person with great martial arts skills without being discovered? The most interesting thing is that every time the heroine changes identities, the other one disappears and no one notices... There is no need for the hero to be so stupid, right? Same hairstyle, same skin color, same height, same body shape. Even if these can be changed, the voice can't be changed! Can't hear the sound? So unobservant? Is it so unclear? If you don't have the ability to observe, the character of the hero general will not match him. There is a big gap between him and him, and there are really a lot of loopholes... He clearly knows that Qiu is going to kill him and monitor her, but he is soft-hearted every time... The Great Holy Mother? You are still so hesitant to deal with your enemies, yet you still have to make friends! And even though she knew that the original person was going to betray the Mo family, she still got involved. Even though she was forced, why could the original person escape but the heroine couldn't? So stupid? Do you only have carpentry in mind? I hope the author will take a good look at the female protagonist's outlook and character, change her indecisive character, and change the male protagonist's IQ. The female protagonist will almost have "Sang Xuanqing and Zheng Quchi are the same person written on her forehead!" The male protagonist did not suspect that the female protagonist was a spy before, and secretly monitored her, but stopped monitoring her after the work was done... And did not carefully check the female protagonist. Given the identity, household registration and background of the protagonist, how could such a careless general lead his troops to fight? If the author had set Shan Bian's martial arts to be very high, he would have been unlikely to be caught when he was ambushed that day. He would have definitely resisted, but there was no resistance at all. If his martial arts were not high, how could he have followed the heroine and communicated messages with the music master in the military camp without being discovered? It is unreasonable to eavesdrop under the eyes of a highly skilled martial artist without being discovered! Next, why does Qiu only have a sense of existence in the heroine, but is just like a shadow in others and no one remembers it? No explanation! There is also the background of the era, the level of martial arts, the specific level of craftsmen, and the living environment of the heroine. There is no good explanation, which leads to a lot of bugs. However, the subject matter is still very novel, but there are problems with the author's setting and the details are not enough. The explanation is not clear. It really cannot withstand scrutiny. It can be watched without thinking.

The more I watched, the more confused I became, and I really couldn't stand it anymore. It's quite funny at the beginning, and there are some funny moments throughout, but the IQ of everyone in it is completely down, and there's no one else. A general who is regarded as a wise and strategic general, I really feel that everyone in this book has been forcibly reduced in intelligence, but it has been reduced a lot, and it's embarrassing.

I hope the author can keep writing. If conditions permit, it would be nice to update more chapters every day

The writing is very nice, except for the vests of the male and female protagonists. I feel that the author's writing is a bit sloppy, but the effect is amazing. Even when the male and female protagonists face to face, no one can recognize each other.

I love this crazy love-minded male protagonist! ! ! Go, go, go!

Is it np? Is it np? Is it np? Will there always be male protagonists in the future? 😭

Haha, the author, you are such a good writer, I was scratching my head when I read it in the middle of the night...

The male protagonist wants to massacre a city in order to find the female protagonist, but the female protagonist is indifferent at first and just wants to run away. Finally, she is forcibly knocked unconscious and taken into the city before she decides to come out. You say the female protagonist is cold-blooded. She is about to get into a stampede accident. She also saves people in the crowd. You say the female protagonist is a holy mother. She can be indifferent to massacre and prepares to run away. This is different from those cannon fodder books in which the protagonist loves to come and go, leading to a war between immortals and demons. The destruction of life only adds to the love between the male and female protagonists. What's the difference between the plot of "Idiot"! This plot is a huge failure

It looks so good. The author Qiuqiu Block has updated it