Keeper

I tolerate typos, but this one is too messed up! Has the mystery of the Li family been finally solved? What happened to Zhang Lingtian in the end? What did the people of Shura Heaven do? Bai Ran committed suicide. I also felt very confused. I really liked this book at first, but in the end... You didn't answer the previous one. Just use it, Bai Ran committed suicide, Qing Cang used his life to save her, and in the end, Meng Xuanlang cried and solved it? You don't have many, many, many. Just answer your question and it's over...

I have never complained about any novel. I think it is not completely unacceptable. It is all the hard work of others. But you, the author, please stop writing it. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I really swear. The summary can only be summarized in two words: "Fuck"

Hhhhh

I really can't stand it anymore. Please try to write an article with a more correct outlook on things later. One question at a time. When other people raise their hands, the heroine always asks why. Can you ask less questions? Damn it, really a primary school student? ?

I think the content is okay, but the heroine has too many questions. She is always asking questions, asking questions at critical moments, and always making noises at critical moments🤐🤐, which would not make her look cute.

Wouldn't it be better if you write more typos?

I was so stunned that I couldn't even finish a chapter. I was embarrassed to read this book for the first time in ten years.

The content is exciting and rich, the suspense is increased, and the supernatural is very good

Not so good ahead

Whether Senior Brother Meng is a boy or a girl, and the leader, they are all words used to describe girls.