Ye Luoli Fairy Dream Fire Contract
by Liu Yiyan
About This Novel
Gao Taiming was resurrected, and the Fire Lord unlocked the seal and came to the human world to conclude the strongest Ye Luoli contract. Who are the new Ye Luoli warriors? What is the queen's conspiracy? And in another dimension, the ancient demon king Kong Xuan also came to the fairyland with the help of ancient power. What will happen between them?
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Official(5)Scraped 9d ago
Author please take a look at the proposal
The author, your subject matter and copywriting are very good, but I think you actually do not have a clear outline theme, and one thing, author, your paragraphs are not clearly divided, which is the most important shortcoming. Writing a novel is not writing a composition. The dialogues and side stories of the characters must be clearly separated. The biggest shortcoming, author, is that you write all the side stories and dialogues together, which makes many readers a little confused. Forget the author, keep up the good work.
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The inspiration for this book is great, but it would be even better if it was enclosed in double quotes. But I still support you!
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Official(5)Scraped 9d ago
Author please take a look at the proposal
The author, your subject matter and copywriting are very good, but I think you actually do not have a clear outline theme, and one thing, author, your paragraphs are not clearly divided, which is the most important shortcoming. Writing a novel is not writing a composition. The dialogues and side stories of the characters must be clearly separated. The biggest shortcoming, author, is that you write all the side stories and dialogues together, which makes many readers a little confused. Forget the author, keep up the good work.
What is this?
can't read
The inspiration for this book is great, but it would be even better if it was enclosed in double quotes. But I still support you!
Not good looking, very disappointed
It's just rubbish. What is this written about?
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