Rebirth: Rise of Hong Kong

Too many plots were copied. From the Xu family on the dock to the underworld life, almost every business battle was copied. The parts I wrote were very confusing. I probably copied three books: The Rebirth of Xiangjiang: The Tycoon's Growth, The Training of Xiangjiang, and the other one I copied: When the Young Master of Xiangjiang rises from the police force and becomes the richest man in business, I forgot the name.

Children's minds are very simple. Bao'er felt that Shi Zhijian was unhappy, so she wanted to make him happy and even gave Shi Zhijian her favorite candies. Bao'er was really a little angel.

The first part was pretty good except for the part about her sister, which was a pitfall, but then the protagonist sister was written out as a pitfall. The first thing I felt was that it was very annoying, and the second thing was that it disrupted the rhythm. No matter how good the plot you can write later, neither I nor Reading and Writing can stand it anymore. The author should continue to fill in the pitfalls. The author's book about quitting is very strange.

This is how this society is. If you are weak, others will think you are easy to bully, but as long as you are tough, they will not dare to offend you. This is why Shi Zhijian is so arrogant in the VIP area.

It's almost 2 million words, but it's still too busy to get on the stage.

After reading dozens of them, it's normal for others not to read your novel. At the beginning, you go to trick Lei Luo. Lei Luo doesn't have the IQ to be Inspector Zonghua. It will be even funnier when I go to Japan later. You don't know that strong dragons can't overwhelm local cowards. Just find someone to get on the boat and ask, and I'll beat you up. In the face of interests, the Xu family is nothing, let alone the Japanese. You underestimate the Japanese people too much. The scumbag author has no IQ at all.

People like Silly Qiang can be friends and help out occasionally, but why do they need to be taken with them when they do adventurous things? After earning 300,000 yuan from horse racing, the protagonist subconsciously concealed it, but soon Shaqiang started bragging about it everywhere. From then on, it became clear that Shaqiang was a careless person. Even if the protagonist did not stay away, he should not keep him with him when he started his career. But the author is very funny, thinking that having this kind of person around can contrast with the protagonist. What a comparison! Do you want to make the protagonist appear smart by comparing him to a fool? A really smart person would not lead someone like a fool to do things. To highlight wisdom, portray the protagonist's various plans and crisis handling abilities instead of bringing a fool by your side!

After raising it for a month, he gave me an all-nighter! If you haven't had enough of it, you can't!

I think the first few dozen chapters are okay. What's going on with you two?

Silly Qiang must believe Shi Zhijian, he will not spend thirty-five dollars in vain and then lose it. He will definitely be able to turn this factory into treasure. Take a good look at it.