The Mother-in-law is Too Enchanting

The Mother-in-law is Too Enchanting

by Chinese Cabbage Seagull

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10Kwords5chapters
Latest:
Ch. 5大结局
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About This Novel

The first time they met in the pavilion, she ran away as if running away, but she didn't know that he had seen it. The next time they met in the bamboo forest, she ran away again, but she didn't know that his heart had moved. The third time they met at a banquet, he didn't know how many tears and sorrows he had buried away by raising a glass of wine. Finally, the damn emperor died. She killed him with her own hands. He exonerated her and left her alive. She became the longest-standing person in the harem. She avoided him just because she was the concubine and he was the emperor... If possible, what's the harm in enjoying the mountains and rivers?

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濛汀
濛汀84mo ago

The author is great

Come on, come on, I support you, I must insist on finishing writing.

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北陌
北陌南阡83mo ago

I'm here to show off my excitement first~

After reading the full text, I feel that it may be due to limited space. The plot in the last three chapters progresses too fast, the ending is a little rushed, there are a few typos in the text, and the usage of certain words and sentences is wrong, but the overall story is good. It would be better if the last two chapters could be expanded, such as adding some stories about Yue Yan and the general's childhood sweethearts, and adding more descriptions of the story of Xiu Chen and Yue Yan after they left the dynastic war, which would add a lot of color to the whole text😽

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