
Happy Only You
About This Novel
Xixi: "Oh, I still have to take care of you." Huanhuan: "Huh, don't be so sentimental." Xixi: "Oh, my girlfriend is blind." Huanhuan: "Humph, my boyfriend is lame." Xixi: "..." Huanhuan: "Say it again and try!" Xixi: "Don't dare, don't dare, I was wrong." Huanhuan: "Yeah, sample!"
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Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
suggestion
I came across this article by chance. The character setting is good, but I think the author's writing style needs to be improved, and the logic is also problematic. After reading it for so long, I still don't know whether the heroine has a lame leg or a broken leg. With a lame leg, she couldn't stand up when washing rice, even though she was pressed by a wheelchair. In her case, she did not open the wheelchair, but scraped the ground with her hands. Also, she could not stand up on her legs, so she stood up excitedly when she saw the fish pond. These are all problems. I suggest the author to read the articles written by others and practice their writing. I hope these authors can improve.
This book is hopeless
It's hopeless. Fortunately, there's only one chapter. Just stop writing. I feel like your writing style is like that of a classmate who didn't graduate from junior high school. Alas, I have nothing to say.
I accept this
Full of flaws Dry soup A little bit of fish In addition, wild adult starlings cannot speak and no one has taught them. Can the elderly machine play time travel from the tree to the ground? Poor households in poor counties have senior citizens but cannot afford fish... Brother, can you live in the countryside? Is it difficult to just dig up an earthworm and tie it with a hook to catch one?
Various shortcomings. After reading it, I wonder what the author wanted to express? Modify it again.
The heroine looks a little stupid from beginning to end
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 5d ago
suggestion
I came across this article by chance. The character setting is good, but I think the author's writing style needs to be improved, and the logic is also problematic. After reading it for so long, I still don't know whether the heroine has a lame leg or a broken leg. With a lame leg, she couldn't stand up when washing rice, even though she was pressed by a wheelchair. In her case, she did not open the wheelchair, but scraped the ground with her hands. Also, she could not stand up on her legs, so she stood up excitedly when she saw the fish pond. These are all problems. I suggest the author to read the articles written by others and practice their writing. I hope these authors can improve.
This book is hopeless
It's hopeless. Fortunately, there's only one chapter. Just stop writing. I feel like your writing style is like that of a classmate who didn't graduate from junior high school. Alas, I have nothing to say.
I accept this
Full of flaws Dry soup A little bit of fish In addition, wild adult starlings cannot speak and no one has taught them. Can the elderly machine play time travel from the tree to the ground? Poor households in poor counties have senior citizens but cannot afford fish... Brother, can you live in the countryside? Is it difficult to just dig up an earthworm and tie it with a hook to catch one?
Various shortcomings. After reading it, I wonder what the author wanted to express? Modify it again.
The heroine looks a little stupid from beginning to end







