The Supporting Actors for Mao Are More Like the Protagonist Than Me
by The Demon Monk Who Hates Dust
About This Novel
Ding Mo, a terminally ill boy, was beaten to death by an unruly bald monk when he was about to end his life. From then on, the young Ding Mo not only returned to the human world, but also embarked on the path of "scientific cultivation of immortality" that was full of turmoil, directly attacked the way of heaven, and had a long way to go. But not long after he embarked on the path of cultivating immortality, Ding Mo discovered that everyone around him had their own system, the blood of the gods, and they would cheat and upgrade as soon as a golden finger was issued. And your own cultivation should start from hardening your mobile phone?
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Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
What impact will it have if the title of the book is not chosen well?
No one is watching...
suggestion,,,,
The opening is okay, and it roughly explains the basic outline of the journey from death to life, from a mortal to an introduction to immortality. But the writing style is a bit straight, and even if it is not written as a running account, it will still give people the feeling of a running account. There is no good foundation for the introduction of the protagonist and the introduction of the world view. There is no need to condense this part into a short chapter. You can... Cough... You can use two to three chapters to describe the general current situation of the protagonist and the basic situation of the world of immortality to give readers a better understanding and make the novel more attractive... To be honest, after reading this chapter, apart from remembering the name of the protagonist and that the book of laws was interesting, I can no longer remember what was written in detail. It is the kind of book that I forget after reading it once. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that there are too few chapters in the novel. I hope the author will work hard and his writing skills will get better and better. I may be the first reader besides you, and I also hope I can become your first fan🤡
Find a seedling
It's just one piece, so I can't see why, so I'll give you a four-star guarantee first. But are those regulations serious? Water, my crazy water But it's okay, I look forward to the follow-up development
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 6d ago
What impact will it have if the title of the book is not chosen well?
No one is watching...
suggestion,,,,
The opening is okay, and it roughly explains the basic outline of the journey from death to life, from a mortal to an introduction to immortality. But the writing style is a bit straight, and even if it is not written as a running account, it will still give people the feeling of a running account. There is no good foundation for the introduction of the protagonist and the introduction of the world view. There is no need to condense this part into a short chapter. You can... Cough... You can use two to three chapters to describe the general current situation of the protagonist and the basic situation of the world of immortality to give readers a better understanding and make the novel more attractive... To be honest, after reading this chapter, apart from remembering the name of the protagonist and that the book of laws was interesting, I can no longer remember what was written in detail. It is the kind of book that I forget after reading it once. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that there are too few chapters in the novel. I hope the author will work hard and his writing skills will get better and better. I may be the first reader besides you, and I also hope I can become your first fan🤡
Find a seedling
It's just one piece, so I can't see why, so I'll give you a four-star guarantee first. But are those regulations serious? Water, my crazy water But it's okay, I look forward to the follow-up development
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