I Open Prisons in the United States
About This Novel
"Slavery is prohibited in the United States unless you wear striped prison uniform." - "13Th Amendment" "When the prison stock ticker rises more than the Nasdaq, that's the real American dream." -Edward Lind Linde, a simulation game player, traveled to the United States in late 1999 and became the owner and warden of a private prison. But the situation he faced was a bit tricky: Prison guards and deputy wardens whose loyalty is worse than that of dogs. The prisoners were extremely vicious and eager to riot. And bank loans that must be repaid within 30 days. Fortunately, he has awakened the golden finger: as long as he increases his deterrence value against prisoners, he can extract characters, skills, drawings and props. Therefore, in order to realize the American dream of being superior to others, Linde decided to fight violence with violence, even more cruelly than cruelly: Recruit a tactical squad to perform beheading operations on criminals! Build various powerful facilities to guard the prison! Torture prisoners to get hidden funds! Bribe political figures to achieve class leap! Expanding its visibility has made the border prison the largest legal "slave estate" in the United States in the 21st century.
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Official(39)Scraped 2d ago
It's very much like an ancient novel. The protagonist's prison is as attractive as shit to flies.
The organizations targeting the protagonist's prison are coming one after another, each one bigger than the last. It's really tiring to watch the plot. Can't it be more normal? This old cliché is coming out again.
For me, who had just looked up information on American prisons, I knew from the beginning that the author was still too conservative. As one of the most profitable industries in the United States, American prisons have many tricks up their sleeves. For example, it is politically incorrect to force black people to grow cotton in the United States, but prisons are an exception, and the hourly wage can even be 20 cents an hour.
persuade to quit
The protagonist is limited to eight skill slots, and the removed skills will still be available. So what's the point of setting this up? Knowledge goes in and out of the protagonist's brain. Either he doesn't know it, or he removes his skills and forgets them. If you can dismantle them at any time, will he still be unskilled? If you can remove the intermediate skills but are not proficient in them, do you still need to have a primary skill in this skill column? If you remove the primary skills and you know a little bit, will it become a 0.8X primary skill? Zz settings What is the difference between making money and not enjoying it, only completing system tasks, and being a tool person?
Not bad, it is considered a good grass. The only bad point (in my personal opinion): The protagonist's current main plot is to make money and deal with the drug dealers. The character is also very clear, but the character of a righteous devil is insistently added in the middle, which is abrupt and has no foreshadowing. What was originally a cool article about American prisons became "I am still politically correct in the United States"
I always look at making money, but not enjoying it. If this is the case, it won't be enough.
Except for the overall creativity of the book, which is good, other details of the writing and plot are not good.
I can only say that there is a reason for my poor grades, and I don't have to worry about writing books. The reward given by the front foot will be forgotten by the rear foot. The restriction of eight skill columns is very redundant. It doesn't make any sense and is very inconsistent. If you change skills, will your body and memory also change? Others, such as the introduction and power of the switchblade, are obviously wrong, the description of the gunfights and fights are not exciting and boring, and other minor problems are just as annoying as I read them from time to time. I wanted to give up several times because the story didn't end and there were no other similar books. There are also sunk costs in reading.
Hard to describe in one word
The first thirty chapters were just food and grass, but later on they started to poison me. In less than two chapters, I was pointed at a gun twice. It was a complete act of risking my life, and I was stupid.
Looking at the business flow, there is very little plot, similar to the upgrading and monster-killing flow where all the enemies are present. Until I saw the black technology button hard drive, I took it out and cooperated with the Security Bureau. There is no source, no research and development, you are in a prison, you laughed when the market technology was still 32m, where did it come from, check him, I really think everyone else is hellokitty
I have read more than two hundred chapters, and the development aspect is well written, but the protagonist only knows how to make money and rarely enjoys it. It feels more like a worker than a boss, and the more I read, the more boring it becomes.
It's a refreshing piece of writing, but it can feel frustrating from time to time. Let's just say it's the system's invincible style. It's easy for someone to mess with you.
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Official(39)Scraped 2d ago
It's very much like an ancient novel. The protagonist's prison is as attractive as shit to flies.
The organizations targeting the protagonist's prison are coming one after another, each one bigger than the last. It's really tiring to watch the plot. Can't it be more normal? This old cliché is coming out again.
For me, who had just looked up information on American prisons, I knew from the beginning that the author was still too conservative. As one of the most profitable industries in the United States, American prisons have many tricks up their sleeves. For example, it is politically incorrect to force black people to grow cotton in the United States, but prisons are an exception, and the hourly wage can even be 20 cents an hour.
persuade to quit
The protagonist is limited to eight skill slots, and the removed skills will still be available. So what's the point of setting this up? Knowledge goes in and out of the protagonist's brain. Either he doesn't know it, or he removes his skills and forgets them. If you can dismantle them at any time, will he still be unskilled? If you can remove the intermediate skills but are not proficient in them, do you still need to have a primary skill in this skill column? If you remove the primary skills and you know a little bit, will it become a 0.8X primary skill? Zz settings What is the difference between making money and not enjoying it, only completing system tasks, and being a tool person?
Not bad, it is considered a good grass. The only bad point (in my personal opinion): The protagonist's current main plot is to make money and deal with the drug dealers. The character is also very clear, but the character of a righteous devil is insistently added in the middle, which is abrupt and has no foreshadowing. What was originally a cool article about American prisons became "I am still politically correct in the United States"
I always look at making money, but not enjoying it. If this is the case, it won't be enough.
Except for the overall creativity of the book, which is good, other details of the writing and plot are not good.
I can only say that there is a reason for my poor grades, and I don't have to worry about writing books. The reward given by the front foot will be forgotten by the rear foot. The restriction of eight skill columns is very redundant. It doesn't make any sense and is very inconsistent. If you change skills, will your body and memory also change? Others, such as the introduction and power of the switchblade, are obviously wrong, the description of the gunfights and fights are not exciting and boring, and other minor problems are just as annoying as I read them from time to time. I wanted to give up several times because the story didn't end and there were no other similar books. There are also sunk costs in reading.
Hard to describe in one word
The first thirty chapters were just food and grass, but later on they started to poison me. In less than two chapters, I was pointed at a gun twice. It was a complete act of risking my life, and I was stupid.
Looking at the business flow, there is very little plot, similar to the upgrading and monster-killing flow where all the enemies are present. Until I saw the black technology button hard drive, I took it out and cooperated with the Security Bureau. There is no source, no research and development, you are in a prison, you laughed when the market technology was still 32m, where did it come from, check him, I really think everyone else is hellokitty
I have read more than two hundred chapters, and the development aspect is well written, but the protagonist only knows how to make money and rarely enjoys it. It feels more like a worker than a boss, and the more I read, the more boring it becomes.
It's a refreshing piece of writing, but it can feel frustrating from time to time. Let's just say it's the system's invincible style. It's easy for someone to mess with you.
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[Art coefficient:★★] [Abstract coefficient:★★★] [When capital welds iron windows into gold mines - On the bloody compound interest formula behind the American Dream] Commercial deconstruction of violent aesthetics: the path of alienation from warden to capital operator The essence of the protagonist Linde's "deterrence value system" is to digitize violent behavior, improve the prison's "rating" through extreme means such as decapitation and electric shock torture, and turn prisoner management into a numerically driven strategy game. This setting of capitalizing violence coincides with the cruel logic of "beds = money" in the US private prison industry - when prison guards are equipped with tactical teams and prisons are equipped with drone guard towers, capital has transformed punishment into a precisely calculated and bloody business. Anti-routine "slave manor" management: building a closed loop of exploitation in the legal gap The novel creatively transforms the prison into a "legal slave manor": through the tiered charging of VIP cells, the extraction of surplus value through prisoner labor, and the collusion between politics and business to maintain the occupancy rate, a dual-track prison economy is constructed in which "the poor work as cattle and horses, and the rich work as VIPs". This dramatization of the shady behind-the-scenes of private prisons in the United States not only satirizes the hypocrisy of "human rights supremacy" but also reveals how capital twists the law into a profit-making tool. Realistic Projection of Systemic Flow: The Fable of Primitive Accumulation of Capital under Goldfinger The process of the protagonist using the system to extract skills, bribe politicians, and expand the size of the prison is essentially a magical microcosm of primitive accumulation of capital. From the survival pressure of "repaying a bank loan within 30 days" to the ultimate goal of "surpassing the Nasdaq stock code", the novel deconstructs the American dream into a cold formula of "violence + machinations + capital", forming an absurd intertext with the real-life history of the fortunes of private prison giants such as CCA. Black humor of social criticism: tearing apart the fig leaf of the Statue of Liberty with absurd plots When prisoners' sentences are extended because they cannot write essays, prison guards use "provoking relationships between prisoners" as a management secret, and prison stocks become the new investment favorite, the novel uses exaggeration to expose the structural contradictions of American society. This metaphor of "prison is society" satirizes the tyranny of capital behind the "Lighthouse of Freedom" more poignantly than "Prison Break". Conclusion A critical allegory of capital disguised as systemic flow. The author uses violent aesthetics to package the essence of exploitation, uses black humor to deconstruct American myths, and implants deep reflections on the private prison industry in the framework of refreshing writing. Its value lies not only in the scarcity of creativity, but also in deeply combining the entertainment of online articles with social criticism, and revealing the bloody truth of reality in absurd plots.
American story
I recommend a novel about opening a prison. Other prison novels are either about escaping from prison or becoming a prison bully and then escaping to become a villain. However, this book is different. If you go against these, you will not be able to escape and you will be arrested and used as coolies. Only those who work honestly and conscientiously or are good people can have their sentences reduced or they can be released directly. I've seen a lot of jailbreak types, and I feel really comfortable watching this one. Just like the Panlong fan, the first important thing to do when traveling through the Panlong world is to fight against the four divine beasts family. Then the four divine beasts are either killed by the protagonist or killed by others, and the protagonist then divides the spoils. Can there be a few different books like this one? Change the angle? This is the style of this book. You guys are making prison break movies, but I am going to make a movie about catching thieves and preventing thieves.
Overall review: Good-looking, imaginative writing, novel enough, and interesting enough Theme: Upper-middle, prison daily simulator + factory opening + special forces mission branch, full farming and game perspective, immersive. Logic: Above average, the author still checked a lot of information, including clear knowledge about the alternation of old and new cartels in Mexico Writing style: Above average, modern writing is acceptable, especially the sensational pieces about the return of the prodigal son of a prickly-headed prisoner, which are very touching. Level of enjoyment: Above, a prison simulator in God mode. Complete the mission to open new buildings, and there is also a mind control tower to prevent the second and fifth gangsters. Can you be unhappy? It scratches an itch.
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