Rewriting the Technology Landscape

The writing and plot of this book are quite good, but there are two problems: 1. There is too much nonsense in the description and explanation monologue, which affects viewing; 2. Too much emphasis is placed on how patriotic the protagonist is, giving readers a strange feeling that the author is just trying to make a fool of himself. You can change your expression, such as starting a company to share technology with the country, hinting at the direction of future development to responsible leaders, and adding an academician title. This is better than having to say "patriotic" in every few sentences. This is a new century, and a new century has new century ideas and development plans. The development of the times is based on making mistakes again and again and correcting them. If you don't make those mistakes, you won't be unforgettable. You can bring them advanced technology and concepts, but you can't give them ideological and spiritual changes and sublimation. If you haven't experienced labor pain, how can you understand? How can we learn to change? How can thoughts and spirits be sublimated? How many hardships have we experienced in 20 years? How many times have we adjusted and reformed our thinking and work in a targeted manner? What led to the current situation? These are the lessons learned from making mistakes and suffering losses again and again, so we keep them in mind. We are accumulating experience, moving forward with a down-to-earth load, and strengthening ourselves! Only by remembering, we will not make the same mistakes in the future, and we will be able to move more steadily and faster in the future. We need to take a long-term view. In the interstellar era, great integration is inevitable. This is the wheel of the times and cannot be stopped by a certain group of people or a group. We are now in a period of relative peace. The more losses we suffer, the richer our experience will be. The faster we will develop in the future, the fewer obstacles we will encounter, and the greater our say in the future. Blind xenophobia is not patriotic, it is harming the country! ! !

When I read Chapter 9 and Chapter 10, the word "official government" appeared. What is official government? In my opinion, it is a noun for class differentiation in feudal society. It represents rule, and even seriously, it is synonymous with feudal society. The novel itself is set in the 21st century. If the government is used once, we readers, at least me, will feel very uncomfortable. It makes me have a misplaced perception that I live in a ruled era. I don't know why the author doesn't use "government" just once normally, even if it's official (at least it's a neutral word).

The protagonist is a bit of an angry young man who is too eager for quick success and quick success. A small company wants to make a big production, as if you are the savior.

If you give employees shares, you don't want to look at them. Why should you give your hard-earned money to others? Do you just listen to what others say? If someone wants you to eat, do you want to eat? [Emot=default,04/]

It feels like the protagonist of this book has a grudge against the employees? There are only a hundred people for such a large amount of business. If there are one customer service staff for 10,000 online players, then it would take a hundred people.

Chinese companies are eager for quick success and quick profit. With the market like this, survival is already very difficult. If you engage in technology, you will go bankrupt. It is not as good as real estate.

Isn't it too easy for you to acquire technology from other countries on a large scale? The country is not blind. Even if you can acquire it, you won't be able to use the technology immediately. You don't know if the country will handle the procedures for you even if both parties sign a contract. It is impossible for large-scale technology companies to run away with their technology. Even if you have an idea, it will be difficult to implement. Every country has restrictions as long as it is a technology industry, and every country has company laws. It's impossible to move a smaller national technology company even if you want to.

What I have always written about is business technology and so on. I would like to add some other fun elements, such as learning to sing and copying popular songs. It is fun and makes money. Occasionally make a movie for fun, who is Stephen Chow? Come work for you! It's too monotonous to only write about business and technology. There are so many pictures. It's not so monotonous to have the life you should have. Jack Ma, the life in full bloom, sings so energetically.

Nowadays, you are going to school and starting a business at the same time. Does your family know that you are so awesome? Bill Gates, Jack Ma and other big guys don't do this?

It's a very good book. Good luck to the author. I really like this kind of positive book. Don't care what other people say about it. There are people like that everywhere. Don't let garbage affect your writing!