Siheyuan: I Love My Home

The poisonous point comes out in the first few pages of the first chapter. At that time, technical secondary school students were all treasures. The junior college students you wrote about were not as good as those junior high school students. Farewell. Please do some research before writing. Farewell.

You are writing a novel! Or are you introducing a novel? ? ?

Not much to say, just take a look at the picture above and see for yourself whether you can bear it or not. With the money for decoration and construction, I can buy several completed houses directly!

Since the identity after time travel is to be a doctor, why not set the identity of the previous life and the previous life a little better. In the previous life, he was a doctor or the predecessor studied with an old doctor. No matter how bad his academic performance is, it will be fine. After only a few chapters, the old-fashioned plot of relying on the system to show off is started. What is the purpose of sending a waste to time travel? He has to make a living. In the first two chapters, the plot is fake and fake. What is the use of the brain? There are 100 courtyard novels and 95 mentally retarded novels!

If you still associate with Xu Damao even though you know he is a villain, then you are not a fool.

You can tell at a glance that the author wrote according to his mood. Not to mention 63, even 73 is not over a hundred. My parents only got 200 yuan for their wedding in 1986 (and the salary was raised at that time.) Your brother and sister-in-law have been married for three or four years. In other words, if you get married in 59, your sister-in-law's gift will be 160 yuan?

Why bother? You can write about chronology even if you don't know anything about it. Moreover, the character descriptions are lackluster, and it's hard to tell what kind of character the protagonist is. For example, when I go to the factory department to go through formalities for becoming a full-time employee, I encounter a silly column, and then I go to write a silly column. You don't explain anything about your position, level, or salary. You just start writing about whoever you meet. This is just a system document. Without a system, it is really worse than a maggot.

The pretentious protagonist is basically not interesting. It is better for the female author to write the heroine, otherwise she will look like a sissy.

It seems there is a reason for the low score

It would be better if there were fewer such Siheyuan articles, why bother.