Rebirth 2006 I Just Want to Be a Gangster

If you want to write about business and making money, there is no need to write too much pretentious content.

At first, I said I could play as I wanted, but later on, I lowered the rent because a woman doesn't care about anything. The key is that you don't play with women. We are just friends. We suffered so much before we were reborn. Now we have to start a business and endure hardships.

How should I put it? A major shareholder has been getting drunk by his subordinates. It's a bit weird. If I want to write about having sex, why not just write about it? I also want to write about being drunk. Can I have sex after being drunk? It's funny.

A novel that makes a big mistake at the beginning

It's a money-making article disguised as a persona, but it's not very well written. Be a bitch

I think it looks good, so I'll give it five stars.

I'll give it a try, eh eh eh

So far, it looks pretty good. The only drawback is that the female supporting role has some issues. Everything else is okay. Keep up the good work and don't let yourself down in the future.

I feel like it was well written, both in terms of characterization and content.

Not bad. The rhythm is well grasped. The general direction is good. Keep writing like this and your grades will not be bad. I have a small suggestion. Don't write about nonsense, love triangles, secret mistresses and the like, bad books.