Under One Person: One Person Goes

I just read the beginning, and my senses are very bad. The author's writing is very awkward, watery, and not clear. When explaining the setting or background, he uses different words to say the same meaning over and over again. Using a seemingly professional tone, he outputs wrong knowledge (?), Such as Changming Yegan, which is clearly translated as "Yeganming". The author does not want to output it in a specious way. In addition, I don't know if the author likes to listen to cross talk, story telling, or watch lectures like Baijia Forum, or watch videos of people like Ma Weidu. When you write a novel, the way of expression is different from theirs. Don't always use the form of knowledge output to intersperse explanations (background, characters, etc.) In the context of the text. It may seem very professional, but in fact it looks very uncomfortable, and there is no coherence like written expression.

Luo Li, I can only read one-third of one chapter. Isn't it enough to just chop off the little Japanese? What's the use of a lot of jabbering?

To be honest, reading novels is just reading novels, but when it comes to politics, I always find it uncomfortable. The writing is good, but I really can't stand it.

I don't know why, but the novel Under One Man has to involve politics. The historical direction has already been determined. In the early days, the National Character Army was at the forefront, right? Did Taierzhuang forget it? Why do we have to write about martyrs?

If you write a good fan fiction and include your own political leanings in it, are you trying to brainwash others? If not, just write novels in a down-to-earth manner and don't mix political things into them. Life is tiring enough, why don't you just relax by reading a novel and stop educating people?

Not bad, please continue to update. It's rare to write about a person so well.

It was okay in the early stage, but later it was like reading the author's reading comprehension notes. There was very little plot, but there were long paragraphs of concepts and reflections😥

I read more than a dozen chapters and it was so boring. I kept emphasizing how talented I was and talking about my ideas.

It is a fusion of Under One Man, the History of the Republic of China, The Age of Awakening, and several movies; the fights are described as childish, and the Magnetic Field joke is played. Generally speaking, just read Shuhuang.

After reading fifty chapters, the author felt sad and angry about the literary youth. His writing is full of the literary youth flavor, and he likes to be a scoundrel, both at the same time. When you write fan fiction, don't include personal information. If you want to participate in the military and political affairs, you don't fully participate. You said you cultivated the human body's magnetic field, but in dozens of chapters I can't tell what exactly you cultivated?