Douluo Shuttles, I'll Use My Fighting Skills, Won't You Explode?

The previous plot feels well written. Once I get to the female part, I feel wet and greasy. If Douluo takes in some girls, I can tolerate a little bit of humiliation, but when it comes to the Little Medical Fairy, I give in. On the first day, they acted as if they were familiar with each other. Did the little doctor just believe in the protagonist based on his face and strength alone? Then he would have been eaten dry long ago. After all, there are many handsome men in the world. There is no vigilance at all, and it feels like the Little Medical Fairy is written in such a way that the IQ of the protagonist will be completely reset when he meets it. It doesn't feel like the original at all. If it doesn't work, just cut off the main character and the emotional line. What you wrote is really bad. I feel that many readers are like me and will be dissuaded from accepting girls. Give full play to your strengths. Your imagination is pretty good, but you have become stronger. Just make the part about recruiting girls simpler. You don't have to write it down so hard, just like the boss played by Zhang Han. A mysterious confidence. It can be given 5 stars for the plot, and 0.5 Stars can be deducted for Douluo's daughter. If you are a little medical fairy, you will be directly reduced by 1.5 Stars. So far I have only seen The Little Doctor, so I can't help but leave a comment. The Little Doctor is really too OOC. It doesn't even feel like a little doctor. Again, if it doesn't work, the author should just cut off the emotional line, and just upgrade it without thinking. Based on your emotional line, would it be embarrassing for you to watch it yourself?

I didn't read it, I only read the comments. Some people said that Shura is equal to Dou Sage. Aren't Douluo and Dou Qi a perfect match? What is the concept of Dou Sheng? Fighting Saints can even open up a world. Isn't letting Douluo go be equivalent to opening up a divine realm on his own? Does Douluo's god know how to play with space? Can a space wormhole be opened? The northwest continent of Dou Qi Continent alone is much larger than the earth. As for Douluo, it only takes more than half a month or a month's carriage ride from the border of Tiandou City to the capital of Tiandou. And you are still resting and eating in the middle, just this distance, you are fighting against porcelain. The fighting spirit armor of a great fighting master is not stronger than your martial soul. The fighting spirit can condense all things, the fighting king can fly, the fighting emperor can sense the space, the fighting clan can tear the space, the fighting saint can travel through the endless space, the fighting saint can open up the world, what can the fighting spirit do, and the fighting spirit has just become a fighting spirit. A god's garbage plus a 100,000 kilogram super artifact can only be inserted into a broken city wall when thrown out, and it is still a pitifully small city wall. Dou Huang's Haibodong can freeze a city in an instant. You don't even know that the city destroyed by Dou Luo is the sum of several cities on the earth. Dou Luo's city is not as big as a remote village in China. Just use Dou Luo to fight against porcelain. The God King is comparable to a fighting saint, but there is a small black hole that cannot be solved behind. And there is not only one God King, but also a group of first-level gods, second-level gods, and third-level gods. Even the priests don't know that there are thousands of them, but they can't solve a small black hole. Why don't you say that Douluo's title is comparable to the Great Luo Golden Immortal in the ancient world, the priests are comparable to the Hunyuan Golden Immortal, and the divine king is comparable to the Great Dao? ? ?

The protagonist is too small, and the double door to watch the cow is only helpful to Douluo. It's useless when you reach the Dou Qi Continent, and it becomes even weaker in the later stages. The early development route is also not good. Douluo goes to the Royal Academy to find fairy grass. It is better to run Qibao Showdown directly at the beginning. He can get the fairy grass directly, and take Ning Rongrong and Jian Gu to search for treasures in Douqi Continent. Extremely fast upgrade, the protagonist's status is too low, except for some talents, there is nothing else. If you don't upgrade quickly, it will be difficult to protect yourself in the Dou Qi Continent. Even if you know there are good things, you won't have the strength to get them. The Dou Qi Continent also went directly to sign up for Canaan. The training resources for martial arts and fighting skills are provided to anyone with talent, and there are no restrictions. It's no better than if you ran away from Yunlan Sect and ended up joining Gama.

The latest chapters are really like shit. No matter how strong the protagonist is, he has no problem with Tang Hao. He is still playing house with Xiao Zha San and the others. Yu Xiaogang also made it clear that he wants the protagonist's skills. The protagonist can obviously slap him to death. However, the protagonist starts to play tricks here, thinking that this is a female channel, a very poisonous group. I suggest you change these chapters. If the little Zha San is a disgusting person, he will be killed directly and his soul will be crushed to ashes. If there is a Shura God to help the little Zha San and he is not afraid, can he still chase him to the Dou Qi Continent? Wait until the protagonist fights against the sect before trying the power of God Shura. I really don't understand why this kind of drama is happening. I really thought it was a female channel. A mere great soul master and soul master dare to disgust the protagonist, a person with the combat power of a titled Douluo.

I'm a little speechless every time I choose. I don't use whale glue. The first ring is to do Sisi for 500 years. Isn't joining Canaan Academy the best option for Dou Po? Moreover, Xiao Yan has become a great fighting master in three years. The protagonist absorbs fairy grass, absorbs soul rings, and can also take pills to improve his level. It took several years to reach level 44.

It feels a bit like Al. Com, the soul bone of the seventh soul ring is simply written off.

You have started to raise the sewers again. If this continues, some people will be lost. God Shura is comparable to Dou Sage, so awesome.

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can only say that I quite like double penetration. What is the strength of Shura and the Fighting Saint? Can you clarify the standard of combat power? Dou Sheng can open a small space, but he can still live as a human being. What does Shura have? That sword? How heavy? 100,000 Pounds? What is a fantasy sewer? Do you understand? Do you want to go see more? You said that the Dragon God has the strength of a fighting saint. I won't say anything else. If it weren't for the fact that 5 of them can be combined into one to have the strength of a short-lived creation god, it would still be the most fucking rubbish. I just hope you can read more of the other works. Or read more of the original work and what he said in the interview. After all, the third young master of the Tang family really likes to show off. Let's understand his system first. Hey.

Which is the main world? If you run between these two sides, why don't you break through Douluo in Douluo and kill them randomly when you return?

The previous part was okay, but the part about the little doctor is really disgusting. The main character is too greasy, and it's so embarrassing to watch. What did you write about the little doctor?