Technology Ring

Lin Feng or Chen Feng? . . . . .

Artificial intelligence programs actually run on mobile phones. Can it be a bit popular? The same goes for helmet production. You don't need to read the rest to know that the plot is the same. There is no general logic.

Give it a three-star rating! Give some small suggestions to the author. The idea is good, but the writing is not good. The grammatical error rate in the first ten chapters exceeds 60%, which is fatal for a book. At the very least, you must read the sentences you write yourself and make them coherent. Always using related words to forcefully connect the previous and next sentences, which makes it awkward to read and even worse to sound. I suggest the author take some time to revise it. The number of words does not mean the quality of a book. From the contents of the previous dozen chapters, it can be seen that the author is a new writer and his vocabulary is too small. It is recommended that you take the time to read more classic articles and novels to increase your vocabulary, so that you can remember it faster. The segmentation of web articles is also very important. Good segmentation can make people read comfortably and continue reading without realizing it. Online articles are different from short articles. You don't need a scene or a conversation to be divided into paragraphs. You can write a sentence into a separate paragraph with a dialogue, for example: Lin Feng thought for a moment and said, "It will take about seven days." Lin Feng was puzzled: "Why is this?" Lin Feng showed a confident smile: "For me, it's that simple." Wait! A good book not only requires good ideas, but also excellent writing style. Finally, I would like to give a suggestion to the author. Try not to use related words. If you use too many related words, you will not be able to express what you want to express. It will be superfluous and inconsistent.

That is, when the protagonist is helping others make things, he always takes it upon himself to modify them for others. You have signed a contract, so if you modify it at will, you are not afraid of others trying to trick you? Even if not. If you add more work to yourself, aren't you stupid and bad? Forget it, the author who posted it here probably won't read it.

Simply ridiculous! From the beginning to the end, it is completely like the author's dream of ego, and it is so messy that it does not conform to normal logic at all! First of all, I would like to ask the author, at the beginning, you built an intelligent substance printer with functions such as substance analysis, molecular structure, substance reshaping, etc., And you called this machine a 3D printer. Is it really okay? ! Secondly, I would like to ask the author, do you know that if you take too big a step, you will break your balls? ! A sophomore student who has not shown any scientific research talent before, nor has shown a strong learning capacity in terms of knowledge accumulation, suddenly started to engage in scientific research, and even produced scientific research results that many countries have not been able to achieve. Do you think everyone is a fool? ! Genius must also have a foundation! In addition, the pig's trotters are Chinese, not Gui Lao, and we, the official rabbit, are not the big capitalists like Gui Lao! If the pig's trotters are so awesome, the officials will definitely take care of the pig's trotters. This is inevitable! But what the hell is written in the article? ! Finally, if the pig's trotters are not in arrears in IQ, as long as they have a brain, they should know that they should not do that at all! And what about pig's feet? Just did it! So, author, what do you want to express?

What will the state do to you? Slicing research is not enough. But. I will build a research institute for you. Let you research technology. Of this institute. Within a radius of ten miles. There won't be an ordinary person. You can't even get out. And you will be monitored 24 hours a day. Even the shit you poop will be studied. Say it yourself. Did you resist? I can't resist, yet I dare to be so promiscuous. What can I say about your ignorance. Or to challenge people's hearts?

Is a piece of shit okay? That would solve the problem of waste of earth resources and garbage pollution. No brainer, right? With this function, I sent it to the official website of Sister Baoer, but they only made 1 million in return. I wonder why this 3D printer that converts matter is so bad? Abandoned the book

Someone else escaped, how did you know that the other person was driving drunk?

What kind of rubbish is this? . . . . . . . . .

I just want to say that it's already been 600 chapters. Is it interesting to still mess around in this small area of ​​​​the earth?