Kendo Junyang

First, your protagonist's name is Ximen Chuixue. Second, the protagonist said that he wants to become the God of Swords. Anyway, you have revealed a purpose, to become the God of Swords. As for the Sword God Ximen Chuixue and the Sword Immortal Ye Gucheng, I won't say how much influence these two martial arts characters have. Both of them have been dedicated to the sword their whole lives, and they are loyal to the sword and extremely dedicated to the sword. Therefore, I won't say much about the character of the protagonist in this book, but in terms of martial arts moves, it is best to only practice swordsmanship in addition to light kung fu and practice skills. In this way, you can be specialized and refined, and you can defeat all kinds of magic with one sword, instead of learning here and there, miscellaneous and refined. It should be noted that in today's novels, the protagonists are mostly all-powerful little supermen. They are always a cheat and become all-powerful, which is really annoying. Therefore, there is no need for the protagonist to learn this or that. In the end, he will be miscellaneous and refined, becoming an all-round expert, and finally fall into a routine. The protagonist only needs to specialize in swords, and his entire ability is specialized in killing techniques. He can defeat all kinds of magic with one sword, and there is no need for anything else. When you become a real sword god and become powerful, with just one sentence, countless people will do it spontaneously, just to get some advice from the protagonist. If you have other needs, you can make more friends. I really don't recommend the cliché that the protagonist knows everything and is awesome at everything. Please note that no one is perfect, not even a saint can know everything. Although I am writing a novel, it must be reasonable. The protagonist specializes in swords, which is good. That's a lot to say. I really like your novel and don't want it to end up in a disgusting cliche. I hope you, the author, can consider it! ! ! !

Many chapters don't have chapter names. I don't want to read them when I see them without chapter names. A work that could have been a hit was ruined by the lack of chapter names. What a pity

Is it an author who can't even figure out the name of the protagonist? I'll just give it a try.

It works perfectly right after the system upgrade. Isn't that ridiculous? You don't need to get used to it?

What can I say about this novel? The language structure is a bit rough. Regarding the lack of popularity of this book, a large part of the reason is the character of the protagonist, Leng Tou Qing, who is a bit self-righteous. Another reason is that the characters in the plot are too stereotyped, the plot is too cliche, and the villains and the protagonist have extremely low IQs. Maybe the author didn't write a good outline. The last reason is the level of martial arts, which is too old-fashioned. It was set more than ten years ago, and how many levels are there in the mortal level. . . I can only say that the author's spirit deserves encouragement.

Can a time traveler be a little different? It's boring to always be like this

I like this book because it's good. I want to say, can you add a little bit of swordsmanship from Jin Guliang's martial arts novels? After all, he is a sword god.

It can be written...

I was not born before you were born, but I was already old when you were born. I hate that you were born late, but you hate that I was born early.

You can still see the front, but the back is a mess.