Rebirth: the Days of Living with Immortals

The pace is very slow, and there are many unnecessary descriptions. At best, it is very literary, and at worst, it is very verbose. The key is not the description of the characters.

Flower art, what's the name of An Xiaoqian? What you wrote is so rubbish.

You are reborn from the end. Just for falling in love.

Dog meat cannot be put on the table, and pig's feet are just hanging, which is not grand.

The writing is pretty good, but I wrote too much about a mythical figure who has nothing to do with me. If you were a starring role or a director, or someone with funding, you could still write so much. If you want to describe the companionship of the heroine, you can write your own project.

It's too watery and polished by AI. It's really uncomfortable to listen to the book, it's grinding, and the intro is too long. I took 30 chapters in the college entrance examination. I'm either studying or taking exams. Shadow ability has something to do with the brain.

After reading more than 60 chapters, forget it, I really can't relate to it, but I also understand the author's intention. The author probably didn't want to write a dog-licking article, but the writing style is indeed poor. The same connotation makes people feel groveling and deliberately trying to please you, so the sense of separation is very strong. This book is okay for fans, but it is probably difficult for others to read.

It's disgusting to have an immortal, and I have to say 10 more words

The first is Sissi's true love fan fantasy article, which swept the 3A Best Actress Grand Slam in one year. . . Secondly, there is a collection of rumor refuting materials, which I found pretty good; Finally, there is Huayuwen, which is mainly a director + investor. This part is really not good.

Well written, keep it up. Just for the serious attitude in checking the information, I will give it 5 stars.