Rebirth of Disaster, Unlimited Upgrade of Shelter
About This Novel
[Rebirth System + Zombies + Explosive Supplies + No Virgin + RV Escape] The end of the world suddenly comes, and natural and man-made disasters occur one after another. The protagonist returns from rebirth and prepares frantically before the zombies arrive. Occupying the Jiahao Plaza shopping mall as a shelter, the shelter gradually expanded, and he vowed to change everything and find the answer.
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Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
Have you ever considered improving yourself?
I think the level of authors who write systems is limited, and they are not strong enough to write a systematic story. The novel that became popular and became a classic has a system, but it does not. When playing games, do we also appropriately increase the difficulty of the game, system writing, bad streets, and writing opportunities? It doesn't have to be a system.
a bit stupid
Your protagonist is too stupid, and you've only read a few chapters and you're constantly being petty. Since you're writing a rebirth, don't make the protagonist look like a fool, be more thoughtful and ruthless.
Fortunately, the poison is equivalent to most doomsday novels.
The subject matter is good
But you have written too much, and you have written too many elements in the early stage, and you have to fill in many holes in the middle and later stages. I hope you delete some settings, otherwise your book will probably die suddenly.
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Community(0)
Official(4)Scraped 3d ago
Have you ever considered improving yourself?
I think the level of authors who write systems is limited, and they are not strong enough to write a systematic story. The novel that became popular and became a classic has a system, but it does not. When playing games, do we also appropriately increase the difficulty of the game, system writing, bad streets, and writing opportunities? It doesn't have to be a system.
a bit stupid
Your protagonist is too stupid, and you've only read a few chapters and you're constantly being petty. Since you're writing a rebirth, don't make the protagonist look like a fool, be more thoughtful and ruthless.
Fortunately, the poison is equivalent to most doomsday novels.
The subject matter is good
But you have written too much, and you have written too many elements in the early stage, and you have to fill in many holes in the middle and later stages. I hope you delete some settings, otherwise your book will probably die suddenly.
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