When I Was in College, I Started to Become a Baby Daddy
by Luanyi
About This Novel
The new book has been released, "Daddy: The Goddess Called Just After Graduation" A year ago, Lin Xuan met a woman. A year later, when Lin Xuan met her again, he did not expect that she would have two children, and these two children were still his own. The sudden arrival of two babies and the activation of the perfect daddy system. Let Lin Xuan embark on the life path of taking care of babies. He has top cooking skills, top musical instrument master talents, and a net worth of tens of billions. He wants to be good-looking, talented and talented, and he wants to have a good figure. From then on, he spends money like water to give his babies and wife the best life possible. It makes countless women jealous, why does such an outstanding man belong to someone else?
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Official(260)Scraped 11d ago
good book
Suggestion: The author increases the number of updates Reason for recommendation: This book has an impact on families and can also make people feel whether they are happy or not. Recommended 🌟 level: 5 🌟
great!
I originally thought it was just an ordinary encounter. I didn't know the other person's name or any information, and didn't leave any traces. However, what the single Lin Xuan never expected was that fate was so wonderful. When they met again, he even had a cub, and he also got a system.
I don't understand why Yang Ziyi doesn't look for Lin Xuan after so many years! ? Is it because Lin Xuan is still a student? Still can't find it? It must have been hard for Yang Ziyi to take care of her children alone for so many years!
From experience, let's comment on the beginning.
In fact, it is more suitable for newcomers, or people who can tolerate the poisonous points. If it is based on the past, it is indeed the audience. But now, the book friends who read on QQ are generally old bookworms. They should have read a lot of this type. They will not read casually like before. They care more about the details, that is, they prefer to follow the logic of reality. For example, I just read the beginning of this book. When he sees the heroine, he will be surprised! It means that he doesn't know everything about the heroine and only remembers the night with her a year ago. You get the system, and you know everything about her in an instant. The male protagonist will feel normal, as if there is no emotion, and it will feel like the same old conversation. The male protagonist asks the female protagonist if she has a child. If the female protagonist doesn't immediately think of why he knows, then I won't waste so many words and get to the point (the male protagonist, the female protagonist or everything around them feel dead and have no soul). I don't know if there will be more lively writing in the future, but the first three golden chapters will dissuade many people. Why do I want to say these things? I hope that the authors will get better and better, that you can make money, and that we can have happiness. The above is just my personal opinion. I don't know if everyone's preferences are the same. Comments are all based on feelings and only represent personal opinions.
The author is definitely a primary school student, or is only at primary school level
Just improve your writing skills and don't hang around here.
Baishuiwen, well, it's like drinking boiled water. It's bland and tasteless, with no logical writing skills. I guess I used to be an accountant and was good at running water.
Discourage them directly
A student and a teacher at one time, and they also need money, and they also have a boutique label🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷 ️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷 ️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️ 🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️ 🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷 ️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷 ️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️Too rubbish
Oops! It's not easy. After reading more than 200 chapters, I finally got married!
I originally thought that this is a novice author, and writing such an article can be regarded as an attempt at writing, which is acceptable. I didn't expect that the author actually wrote one or two books and has a million-word foundation. Although novels cannot bring reality into it, when looking at this novel, the plot, language description, and dialogue all seem quite awkward. Instead, some less important plots are written too much, which feels like putting the cart before the horse.
Don't criticize, just give me some suggestions based on facts. You can write novels with this theme as you wish, but when it comes to baby issues, can you not be divorced from reality? In the first chapter, you got the system directly, so I assume that you have not traveled through time. You also said later that the skeletal development of 3-month-old babies is not complete, but why did you buy a car and use it as a safety seat for your baby, even when you go to a restaurant to eat? Has the baby transformed into a superman? I don't know if you, the author, are married. As a parent, if you have a baby, then you are not qualified as a parent. I don't know how many book friends don't have babies yet. What you write can easily lead to misleading. Don't be afraid of 10,000, just be afraid of the worst. If the future book friend reads your book and lets a 3-month-old baby become a car seat, it will be a lot of fun.
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Community(0)
Official(260)Scraped 11d ago
good book
Suggestion: The author increases the number of updates Reason for recommendation: This book has an impact on families and can also make people feel whether they are happy or not. Recommended 🌟 level: 5 🌟
great!
I originally thought it was just an ordinary encounter. I didn't know the other person's name or any information, and didn't leave any traces. However, what the single Lin Xuan never expected was that fate was so wonderful. When they met again, he even had a cub, and he also got a system.
I don't understand why Yang Ziyi doesn't look for Lin Xuan after so many years! ? Is it because Lin Xuan is still a student? Still can't find it? It must have been hard for Yang Ziyi to take care of her children alone for so many years!
From experience, let's comment on the beginning.
In fact, it is more suitable for newcomers, or people who can tolerate the poisonous points. If it is based on the past, it is indeed the audience. But now, the book friends who read on QQ are generally old bookworms. They should have read a lot of this type. They will not read casually like before. They care more about the details, that is, they prefer to follow the logic of reality. For example, I just read the beginning of this book. When he sees the heroine, he will be surprised! It means that he doesn't know everything about the heroine and only remembers the night with her a year ago. You get the system, and you know everything about her in an instant. The male protagonist will feel normal, as if there is no emotion, and it will feel like the same old conversation. The male protagonist asks the female protagonist if she has a child. If the female protagonist doesn't immediately think of why he knows, then I won't waste so many words and get to the point (the male protagonist, the female protagonist or everything around them feel dead and have no soul). I don't know if there will be more lively writing in the future, but the first three golden chapters will dissuade many people. Why do I want to say these things? I hope that the authors will get better and better, that you can make money, and that we can have happiness. The above is just my personal opinion. I don't know if everyone's preferences are the same. Comments are all based on feelings and only represent personal opinions.
The author is definitely a primary school student, or is only at primary school level
Just improve your writing skills and don't hang around here.
Baishuiwen, well, it's like drinking boiled water. It's bland and tasteless, with no logical writing skills. I guess I used to be an accountant and was good at running water.
Discourage them directly
A student and a teacher at one time, and they also need money, and they also have a boutique label🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷 ️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷 ️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️ 🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️ 🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷 ️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷 ️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️🏷️Too rubbish
Oops! It's not easy. After reading more than 200 chapters, I finally got married!
I originally thought that this is a novice author, and writing such an article can be regarded as an attempt at writing, which is acceptable. I didn't expect that the author actually wrote one or two books and has a million-word foundation. Although novels cannot bring reality into it, when looking at this novel, the plot, language description, and dialogue all seem quite awkward. Instead, some less important plots are written too much, which feels like putting the cart before the horse.
Don't criticize, just give me some suggestions based on facts. You can write novels with this theme as you wish, but when it comes to baby issues, can you not be divorced from reality? In the first chapter, you got the system directly, so I assume that you have not traveled through time. You also said later that the skeletal development of 3-month-old babies is not complete, but why did you buy a car and use it as a safety seat for your baby, even when you go to a restaurant to eat? Has the baby transformed into a superman? I don't know if you, the author, are married. As a parent, if you have a baby, then you are not qualified as a parent. I don't know how many book friends don't have babies yet. What you write can easily lead to misleading. Don't be afraid of 10,000, just be afraid of the worst. If the future book friend reads your book and lets a 3-month-old baby become a car seat, it will be a lot of fun.
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