
How to Stay Flat Without a System in the Siheyuan
by Timbo
About This Novel
If the time-travelers are compared to butterflies, then Chen Jinnian is a butterfly with wings erect and just wants to live peacefully. But even if he does not flutter his wings, the scales on his wings will fall with the wind, narrowing some people's eyes and changing some people's lives.
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Read Chapter 21
I've read Chapter 21. I won't go into too much detail, but I'll just give you a few sentences. First of all, the author must admit that the historical background of this courtyard house has a very distinctive flavor. This is undeniable. Let's talk about Lou Xiao'e who the author is talking about. You said that someone took over her family property, she had a beloved "Silly Pillar", and she also invested in a courtyard house. From my personal opinion, how did you see that Lou Xiao'e was consummated? I only saw her being scolded as a chicken that couldn't lay eggs when she married Xu Damao. Did the author understand the consequences of this in that era? She was reported by Xu Damao and had to run away. , Before running away, he was deceived into a room with a fool for one night. When he came back, he took his son to watch Silly Zhu. Silly Zhu would only ask her for money. His son was deceived by Widow Qin. Tell me what's wrong with her. The tragedy of the whole TV series. Things are often unsatisfactory in life. What she lacks is a coffee table, which is full of tragedies. Who is the winner in the Siheyuan TV series? It's not the fool, nor Qin Huairu, but the thief. A stick figure is a winner in life! None of Zhu Xian's four swords can kill Bang Gang, and each of them is trying to clear his name. Not much to say, I've also read Chapter 21, see you later.
To put it simply, a cup of boiled water is still boiled water with poison added. At that time, the security department was equivalent to the current XX branch. It was jointly led by the public security system and the factory. It was equipped with guns and ammunition. Some factories were equipped with artillery. It had the power to review, arrest, and detain people. It has a national cadre establishment, and human resources relations are not affiliated with the factory, but with the public security system. Therefore, when entering the factory, you should report to the human resources department, not the labor department (there is no labor department). Moreover, the Security Department is not allowed to interfere in project management, let alone arrange people to enter important departments such as publicity. In addition, regarding the issue of Yi Zhonghai's eight-level workers, the country did not use the eight-level salary system at the beginning. Later, the eight-level salary system of the Soviet Union was introduced. Later, in order to improve the living standards of the working people, some areas raised the already-graded work level by one level, so it can only be regarded as a pseudo-eighth level, which is only a seventh-level level. The real eighth-level workers are all transferred to front-line projects (similar to those with two bombs and one satellite or military industrial enterprises). The fact that he has not been transferred is already a problem. The author boasts that there are things in heaven and nothing on earth "National treasure", I just laughed.
Objective evaluation, really poorly written
Write about the courtyard house. In that era of lack of food and clothing. Or, you have to bring some outstanding skills. Or just have some cheats. Write about an ordinary person. Want to have special skills but no special skills. Need skills but no skills. There is no golden finger at all. It's so ordinary that you can't even hear the sound when it's thrown into water. Who can read a book that is as plain as water? It does not mean that you have to have a golden finger. A master's book can capture a lot of highlights even if others are mediocre. Key author, you are not an expert either! I can't control this plain water. Still hard on. . . .
Qingmansiheyuan, haha, what a Qingmansiheyuan. When I first watched the TV series, I thought it was about life in the city, but later I realized that it was just a disgusting hodgepodge put together for the title of the show. Neighbors living in their own ways are definitely not easy to fall in love with in a courtyard house, but opening a nursing home is positive and harmonious. In order to raise the number of people for the nursing home, Yi Zhonghai lost his family, Liu Haizhong's son became unfilial, Yanbu's noble son ran away, the old widow donated her daughter-in-law, and the young widow hooked up with the stupid fool to complete the personnel structure. Therefore, Shazhu's conditions should not be too bad. He could still make money even if he switched to Shandong and Sichuan cuisine. Tan's cooking skills were still good, but they couldn't be too good. So Shazhu's dead father ran away to take a younger sister. He had no tutor, a bad temper, and a bad mouth. Only in this way could he be single. He couldn't get a wife and turned to help, but he couldn't just make a fortune in catering and support a nursing home, so Lou Xiao'e showed up to get her sperm and go to Hong Kong to make a fortune, and gave birth to He Xiao, and Xu Damao stepped on the moral bottom line to cheer everyone up, and they all lived together. The Qingman Siheyuan was born by deducing the result from the cause. If any link in the middle fails, it will be an accident to the outcome, especially if Silly Zhu marries someone else or if He Xiao fails to reincarnate. The reason why people look down on him for being a gangster is because he ends badly. I saw two families with my own eyes. One family hired three men to make their son the prince, but they were shot in 1992 and the family broke up completely. The other family's two sons learned their lesson and found an honest man, but the son got punched and beat the man away. Their life was prosperous.
Except for Lou Xiaoe, everyone with the same name is a good person.
Yi Zhonghai is full of descendants, his father is kind and his son is filial to Liu Haizhong, he is kind and good at giving to Yan Bugui, he is clean and self-sufficient, Qin Huairu, he is not ignorant when he picks up gold, Jia Banggen, the mother-in-law of the people, Jia Zhang, the deaf old lady who sends shoes thousands of miles away, Xu Damao who loves to help others...
Just make do
, what did you call the Siheyuan? The rush is inevitable.
Author, if you want to disgust people, you can't be so disgusting.
The plot is not engaging. The dialogue isn't engaging either. Plain water.
Yi Zhonghai is praised too highly. No matter how high he is, he is just a worker.
You started by writing about Yi Zhonghai, an eighth-level worker, who earned about the same as the factory director. Words in the factory carry weight; Yi Zhonghai lived in a large courtyard, while the factory director lived in a one-story apartment today called a flat floor. Yi Zhonghai can only eat steamed buns, but the factory manager can eat different kinds of dishes. Yi Zhonghai can only wear labor protection clothing, and the factory director wears a Chinese tunic suit. Yi Zhonghai went to work on his legs, and the factory manager had a special car to pick him up. Yi Zhonghai didn't do his job well, and the workshop director and technicians dared to point fingers and scold him. If the factory director fails to do his job well, everyone will pretend not to notice and take the blame. At that time, food, clothing, housing and transportation were all distributed according to class. Those living in the courtyard were at the bottom without even a clerk. If you are a cadre, you cannot live in that courtyard, and the story behind it will be awkward for everyone to read.
The writing is too SB
The writing is so SB. Just one of them got into a fight in the cafeteria, and your uncle, who was still the director of the security department, arrested the other person with just one sentence. The factory director and secretary are all here to take care of it, so what else does the security department do?
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Official(20)Scraped 6d ago
Read Chapter 21
I've read Chapter 21. I won't go into too much detail, but I'll just give you a few sentences. First of all, the author must admit that the historical background of this courtyard house has a very distinctive flavor. This is undeniable. Let's talk about Lou Xiao'e who the author is talking about. You said that someone took over her family property, she had a beloved "Silly Pillar", and she also invested in a courtyard house. From my personal opinion, how did you see that Lou Xiao'e was consummated? I only saw her being scolded as a chicken that couldn't lay eggs when she married Xu Damao. Did the author understand the consequences of this in that era? She was reported by Xu Damao and had to run away. , Before running away, he was deceived into a room with a fool for one night. When he came back, he took his son to watch Silly Zhu. Silly Zhu would only ask her for money. His son was deceived by Widow Qin. Tell me what's wrong with her. The tragedy of the whole TV series. Things are often unsatisfactory in life. What she lacks is a coffee table, which is full of tragedies. Who is the winner in the Siheyuan TV series? It's not the fool, nor Qin Huairu, but the thief. A stick figure is a winner in life! None of Zhu Xian's four swords can kill Bang Gang, and each of them is trying to clear his name. Not much to say, I've also read Chapter 21, see you later.
To put it simply, a cup of boiled water is still boiled water with poison added. At that time, the security department was equivalent to the current XX branch. It was jointly led by the public security system and the factory. It was equipped with guns and ammunition. Some factories were equipped with artillery. It had the power to review, arrest, and detain people. It has a national cadre establishment, and human resources relations are not affiliated with the factory, but with the public security system. Therefore, when entering the factory, you should report to the human resources department, not the labor department (there is no labor department). Moreover, the Security Department is not allowed to interfere in project management, let alone arrange people to enter important departments such as publicity. In addition, regarding the issue of Yi Zhonghai's eight-level workers, the country did not use the eight-level salary system at the beginning. Later, the eight-level salary system of the Soviet Union was introduced. Later, in order to improve the living standards of the working people, some areas raised the already-graded work level by one level, so it can only be regarded as a pseudo-eighth level, which is only a seventh-level level. The real eighth-level workers are all transferred to front-line projects (similar to those with two bombs and one satellite or military industrial enterprises). The fact that he has not been transferred is already a problem. The author boasts that there are things in heaven and nothing on earth "National treasure", I just laughed.
Objective evaluation, really poorly written
Write about the courtyard house. In that era of lack of food and clothing. Or, you have to bring some outstanding skills. Or just have some cheats. Write about an ordinary person. Want to have special skills but no special skills. Need skills but no skills. There is no golden finger at all. It's so ordinary that you can't even hear the sound when it's thrown into water. Who can read a book that is as plain as water? It does not mean that you have to have a golden finger. A master's book can capture a lot of highlights even if others are mediocre. Key author, you are not an expert either! I can't control this plain water. Still hard on. . . .
Qingmansiheyuan, haha, what a Qingmansiheyuan. When I first watched the TV series, I thought it was about life in the city, but later I realized that it was just a disgusting hodgepodge put together for the title of the show. Neighbors living in their own ways are definitely not easy to fall in love with in a courtyard house, but opening a nursing home is positive and harmonious. In order to raise the number of people for the nursing home, Yi Zhonghai lost his family, Liu Haizhong's son became unfilial, Yanbu's noble son ran away, the old widow donated her daughter-in-law, and the young widow hooked up with the stupid fool to complete the personnel structure. Therefore, Shazhu's conditions should not be too bad. He could still make money even if he switched to Shandong and Sichuan cuisine. Tan's cooking skills were still good, but they couldn't be too good. So Shazhu's dead father ran away to take a younger sister. He had no tutor, a bad temper, and a bad mouth. Only in this way could he be single. He couldn't get a wife and turned to help, but he couldn't just make a fortune in catering and support a nursing home, so Lou Xiao'e showed up to get her sperm and go to Hong Kong to make a fortune, and gave birth to He Xiao, and Xu Damao stepped on the moral bottom line to cheer everyone up, and they all lived together. The Qingman Siheyuan was born by deducing the result from the cause. If any link in the middle fails, it will be an accident to the outcome, especially if Silly Zhu marries someone else or if He Xiao fails to reincarnate. The reason why people look down on him for being a gangster is because he ends badly. I saw two families with my own eyes. One family hired three men to make their son the prince, but they were shot in 1992 and the family broke up completely. The other family's two sons learned their lesson and found an honest man, but the son got punched and beat the man away. Their life was prosperous.
Except for Lou Xiaoe, everyone with the same name is a good person.
Yi Zhonghai is full of descendants, his father is kind and his son is filial to Liu Haizhong, he is kind and good at giving to Yan Bugui, he is clean and self-sufficient, Qin Huairu, he is not ignorant when he picks up gold, Jia Banggen, the mother-in-law of the people, Jia Zhang, the deaf old lady who sends shoes thousands of miles away, Xu Damao who loves to help others...
Just make do
, what did you call the Siheyuan? The rush is inevitable.
Author, if you want to disgust people, you can't be so disgusting.
The plot is not engaging. The dialogue isn't engaging either. Plain water.
Yi Zhonghai is praised too highly. No matter how high he is, he is just a worker.
You started by writing about Yi Zhonghai, an eighth-level worker, who earned about the same as the factory director. Words in the factory carry weight; Yi Zhonghai lived in a large courtyard, while the factory director lived in a one-story apartment today called a flat floor. Yi Zhonghai can only eat steamed buns, but the factory manager can eat different kinds of dishes. Yi Zhonghai can only wear labor protection clothing, and the factory director wears a Chinese tunic suit. Yi Zhonghai went to work on his legs, and the factory manager had a special car to pick him up. Yi Zhonghai didn't do his job well, and the workshop director and technicians dared to point fingers and scold him. If the factory director fails to do his job well, everyone will pretend not to notice and take the blame. At that time, food, clothing, housing and transportation were all distributed according to class. Those living in the courtyard were at the bottom without even a clerk. If you are a cadre, you cannot live in that courtyard, and the story behind it will be awkward for everyone to read.
The writing is too SB
The writing is so SB. Just one of them got into a fight in the cafeteria, and your uncle, who was still the director of the security department, arrested the other person with just one sentence. The factory director and secretary are all here to take care of it, so what else does the security department do?



















