Hogwarts Pokémon Professor

Don't you want to write it down? This subject attracted me so much that I stopped writing about it, alas. There is one thing that makes me unhappy. I really want to ask the author, do you have a soft spot for Ron? After entering Hogwarts, Ron's perspective and Ron fantasizing about Kirby. In order to increase the number of words, a less likable character was given. So many words were wasted, which is a bit bad.

Very good looking, but not fat enough. Cheers, author 🤧 But can we stop emphasizing how famous and handsome the protagonist is? Very watery and annoying...

The subject matter is poignant and basically harmless, but it's just too watery. The descriptions are too detailed, almost everything is described. The focus should be on the Pokémon in the Harry Potter world. Some sections that are simply expansions of the original works are unnecessary, such as the sections with the brick wall at the entrance to Diagon Alley. Cheluluo's words are also very common, such as sincerity and bonds. These things make characters say them over and over again in dialogue. Why not just advance the plot and let us see how a little wizard and a Pokémon use sincerity to establish a bond. And the number 2333 shocked me. The first sentence says the quantity has increased, the second sentence says the number is more than 2,300, and the third sentence says the specific number is 2,333. Three sentences for counting water is really high. Dialogue is also the hardest hit area. There will be pauses in dialogue, but this does not mean that these pauses need to be depicted. The description of the speaker is really over-the-top, and the details of the eyes, state, expression, and silence are so detailed that they feel a bit fake. The key content is also repeated, with various excitements, fist-clenching, contemplation, and staring. Moreover, I feel that the author deliberately lengthened each component of the sentence when writing, tried his best to avoid using pronouns, adjectives, adverbs and various complements, and did not miss any opportunity to describe the degree. The dialogue is like this, so I just put it in a translator's tone, and the narration is also very unfriendly to listening to the book, making it very tiring to listen to. This book is suitable for flipping through, and the rhythm is about the same as scanning a page a few times.

Among the vast sea of ​​fan fiction, there are only a few works that truly allow people to read the coexistence of "strange novelty" and "familiar warmth". And "The Elf Professor at Hogwarts" is precisely such a masterpiece. It not only breaks the barriers between two parallel worlds, but also creates a unique world of its own through fusion and extension. The story opens with an invitation letter from Dumbledore. It seems like an ordinary return to work, but it secretly hides a grand intersection of fate. The protagonist Agares is a time traveler who originally planned to avoid the storm in the original Harry Potter book. However, after reaching a contract with Arceus, armed with three special powers and the mission of "let Pokémon take root in the wizarding world", he resolutely decided to step into Hogwarts and become an "elf professor" in a new sense. From this moment on, the Hogwarts we know begins to undergo wonderful changes. In the blazing Forbidden Forest, Pichu's electric flowers appeared; on the quiet lake, Laplace's song floated; in the soil next to the greenhouse, naughty walking grass swayed. The Pokémon described by the author are no longer simply game settings, but a group of "new lives" with personalities and emotions that can establish bonds with wizards. The most touching thing about the novel is not the cuteness of the cute animals, but the sincerity of the two-way relationship between people and Pokémon. Agares is not only a professor, but also a red thread puller. He holds the hand between wizards and Pokémon. The freshmen's exclamation when they first met, their caution when they were touched by their own hands, and their tears of joy when they were finally recognized made the readers' hearts tremble together. The chapter where Laplace crosses the students across the Black Lake pushes this emotion to its peak - the vast galaxy, the backs of Pokémon and the smiles of children together form an unforgettable and eternal scene. On the other hand, this book also does a great job of interacting with the original characters. Dumbledore's profound vision, McGonagall's caution and severity, Snape's venomous tongue and sincere recognition, Flitwick's excited approval, and Sprout's gentle protection, all show another touching color in the contact with Pokémon. Especially the scene where Snape tastes Pokémon materials is a wonderful combination of potions and Pokémon world, which is amazing. This isn't just fan fiction, it's more of an experimental cultural crossover. It allows us to see: Pokémon can become a new branch of magic courses, making Pokémon learning a real subject; Pokémon can dilute the concept of blood supremacy, because they will not choose partners because of their origins, but only because of their sincerity. At this point, the author profoundly writes about the "educational significance" of Pokémon's existence: they can not only bring joy, but also change concepts. At the same time, the novel has a lively pace and natural emotional presentation. From the professor accepting the invitation, to the prosperity of the Pokémon Ranch, to the first meeting between the professor and his students, every step is full of weight. The healing of cute pets, the courage of young people, the ideals of professors, and the support of masters. What is intertwined is a brand-new adventure that combines the majesty of orthodox magic with the innocent childlike interest of Pokémon. Throughout the book, the author has both warm expressions and passionate ideas. The idea of ​​Pokémon battles, the popularity of competitions, the daily lives of cute creatures, and the growth of professors all lay the groundwork for rich possibilities in the future. After reading, there are only two words in my mind: looking forward to it! I look forward to this new world being broader in the author's writing, looking forward to more Pokémon appearing one by one, and looking forward to wizards and Pokémon working together to write a more glorious future. "A Certain Elf Professor at Hogwarts" not only makes people fall in love with the magical flames of Hogwarts again, but also makes people feel tenderness and passion in their hearts because of Pokémon. This is a really good book that can make people read it with a smile and recall it with tears.

The writing is very good. The first-year students have already arrived at Hogwarts. I think the section from when they got off the station to the front of Hogwarts Castle is very beautiful.

If you don't want to write it down, you should at least say something.