Red Mansion: How to Defeat Xue Pan Who Just Killed Someone

The author probably couldn't find the reader's g-spot. It's off to a good start, the author's skills are online, and the writing outline is fine. However, the plot dragged a bit. I don't know about others, but I wanted to see the protagonist show off and watch the plot of The Red Mansion. This book currently gives me the feeling of intrigue. As a political idiot, I can feel that the book is good, but I can't read it. The protagonist is released from prison, goes to Zhuangzi to lure people, and then returns home to negotiate and deceive the tribesmen. I really find it boring. The author probably wants to express that the protagonist is smart, but as a reader, I just think, who is here to see your political wisdom. Am I the only one who came to see the Golden Hairpin in the Red Mansion?

This is too long-winded and too showy. Can you write the main plot? Explain every day, ramble on, don't write fan fiction, why don't you write something original?

The plot progresses extremely slowly, the self-righteous and lengthy analysis is narrated, and the fan works seriously distort the characters in the original book. The characters and plot integrated into the creation cannot explain themselves well, and it feels very disconnected and even inexplicable. The starting angle and characters are thoughtful, but that's all.

The author is afraid of things and is very afraid of readers over-reading and understanding. He must explain clearly the reason for every sentence or idea. I really want to express: Laozi's research on red science is extremely profound!

The beginning is okay, but I can't stand it anymore In the back, there is no distinction between priority, a lot of insights, analysis, various historical figures pop up, and a lot of self-centered explanations, just once or twice. The back is all like this, do you want to go to heaven? Where did the protagonist go? It says that the protagonist disappears. People who read Red Mansions novels like to read the characters in the original novels. You can add some original characters appropriately and make a large group of them for you. So should I read Red Mansions or a new historical novel? The plot advances extremely slowly, and some parts are even more outrageous. ! ! It's not coherent up and down! ! ! Just give me an example: the four people who joined the society were in the brothel, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling, babbling. I'm convinced, but I don't know how novels like this with all the protagonists became popular. Why do you want to imitate Water Margin? You really want to become a masterpiece!

Rotten! That sucks! Where is Xue Xue Pan! There is no such thing as a protagonist, so I watched the back part! 😘

The preface doesn't match the postscript, and those who don't know it think they're watching a pirated version.

Analyzing Red Mansions under the guise of a novel? Hard to comment.

There are too many explanations. Each explanation takes up several chapters. The water is not so watery, right?

From now on, I start to choose my life carefully, and I no longer easily let myself get lost in various temptations. I have heard the call from afar in my heart, and I no longer need to look back and care about all the rights and wrongs and discussions behind me. I have no time to dwell on the past, I want to move forward.