
Red Mansion: How to Defeat Xue Pan Who Just Killed Someone
About This Novel
Red Mansion fan. He was in the red building and had just been imprisoned. He transformed into Xue Pan, who had just beaten Feng Yuan to death, but because of the confusion during the time travel, he was unable to escape and was arrested. This makes Jiayu Village much less worried. However, in order to survive, Xue Pan couldn't worry about it.
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Official(13)Scraped 2d ago
Some thoughts after reading
The author probably couldn't find the reader's g-spot. It's off to a good start, the author's skills are online, and the writing outline is fine. However, the plot dragged a bit. I don't know about others, but I wanted to see the protagonist show off and watch the plot of The Red Mansion. This book currently gives me the feeling of intrigue. As a political idiot, I can feel that the book is good, but I can't read it. The protagonist is released from prison, goes to Zhuangzi to lure people, and then returns home to negotiate and deceive the tribesmen. I really find it boring. The author probably wants to express that the protagonist is smart, but as a reader, I just think, who is here to see your political wisdom. Am I the only one who came to see the Golden Hairpin in the Red Mansion?
This is too long-winded and too showy. Can you write the main plot? Explain every day, ramble on, don't write fan fiction, why don't you write something original?
The plot progresses extremely slowly, the self-righteous and lengthy analysis is narrated, and the fan works seriously distort the characters in the original book. The characters and plot integrated into the creation cannot explain themselves well, and it feels very disconnected and even inexplicable. The starting angle and characters are thoughtful, but that's all.
The author is afraid of things and is very afraid of readers over-reading and understanding. He must explain clearly the reason for every sentence or idea. I really want to express: Laozi's research on red science is extremely profound!
Rotten! That sucks! Where is Xue Xue Pan! There is no such thing as a protagonist, so I watched the back part! 😘
It seems that it has been replaced by AI
The preface doesn't match the postscript, and those who don't know it think they're watching a pirated version.
Analyzing Red Mansions under the guise of a novel? Hard to comment.
There are too many explanations. Each explanation takes up several chapters. The water is not so watery, right?
From now on, I start to choose my life carefully, and I no longer easily let myself get lost in various temptations. I have heard the call from afar in my heart, and I no longer need to look back and care about all the rights and wrongs and discussions behind me. I have no time to dwell on the past, I want to move forward.
Book title is too long
Look at the Martial Saints of the Ten Directions and the Lord of Mysteries. If you want to be popular, you must first have a better title.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 2d ago
Some thoughts after reading
The author probably couldn't find the reader's g-spot. It's off to a good start, the author's skills are online, and the writing outline is fine. However, the plot dragged a bit. I don't know about others, but I wanted to see the protagonist show off and watch the plot of The Red Mansion. This book currently gives me the feeling of intrigue. As a political idiot, I can feel that the book is good, but I can't read it. The protagonist is released from prison, goes to Zhuangzi to lure people, and then returns home to negotiate and deceive the tribesmen. I really find it boring. The author probably wants to express that the protagonist is smart, but as a reader, I just think, who is here to see your political wisdom. Am I the only one who came to see the Golden Hairpin in the Red Mansion?
This is too long-winded and too showy. Can you write the main plot? Explain every day, ramble on, don't write fan fiction, why don't you write something original?
The plot progresses extremely slowly, the self-righteous and lengthy analysis is narrated, and the fan works seriously distort the characters in the original book. The characters and plot integrated into the creation cannot explain themselves well, and it feels very disconnected and even inexplicable. The starting angle and characters are thoughtful, but that's all.
The author is afraid of things and is very afraid of readers over-reading and understanding. He must explain clearly the reason for every sentence or idea. I really want to express: Laozi's research on red science is extremely profound!
Rotten! That sucks! Where is Xue Xue Pan! There is no such thing as a protagonist, so I watched the back part! 😘
It seems that it has been replaced by AI
The preface doesn't match the postscript, and those who don't know it think they're watching a pirated version.
Analyzing Red Mansions under the guise of a novel? Hard to comment.
There are too many explanations. Each explanation takes up several chapters. The water is not so watery, right?
From now on, I start to choose my life carefully, and I no longer easily let myself get lost in various temptations. I have heard the call from afar in my heart, and I no longer need to look back and care about all the rights and wrongs and discussions behind me. I have no time to dwell on the past, I want to move forward.
Book title is too long
Look at the Martial Saints of the Ten Directions and the Lord of Mysteries. If you want to be popular, you must first have a better title.













