I Live Forever in the Troubled Times of the Great Zhou Dynasty

Even two ordinary disciples can't compare to the cheating, and the article is too wordy, and there are so many chapters on the shelf. I am still in the early stage of the first step of condensation. The master takes a new disciple and needs three months to deal with the enemy that he can't deal with in his life. It's awesome. It's like a small company recruits an intern and backhands the intern to kill Douyin in three months.

After reading more than 40 chapters, I originally felt that the first part was okay, but the progress was very slow, but the author's description of the prices was speechless. For 15 taels of silver, I bought 50 kilograms of wheat. How long will 50 kilograms of wheat last? How long does it take to earn? The second question is to kill the female devil. When someone hides under your bed, you sense it, and then you suddenly freeze up. At first, you are being stubborn, but then you say to report it to the gang leader, but no, you are afraid of being discovered by the female devil, and you are afraid of him. I ran away suddenly, and I was afraid that I wouldn't be able to see the big shot, and seeing the big shot might be of no use. To be honest, this place is really not rigorous. I saw the government wanted me at the intersection, so you just need to go out and report it to the government, right? Then he chose to kill him himself, saying that he could gain wealth through danger, and what chance would there be? And then put poison on the food and pretend that others can't sense it? Then he said he was going to buy a drink and went out, and then stood at the door, waiting for others to come out and attack him. The key is that you kept staring at others. You are also a talent, and others are also martial arts practitioners after all. Can't you hear the footsteps? Can't you even feel the sight? Two realms higher than you, is this the dog you are talking about? In the end, people get nothing from killing? I just got a useless exercise and didn't practice it. There is still a little money, and then a huge sum of 60 taels? ? ? ? Are you serious? , He was supposed to be practicing martial arts, but not long after, he had another very violent conflict. When his adoptive father was collecting garbage, he was beaten casually by an inner disciple, and he had to pay compensation, and then he had to pay ten taels of silver every month. . . You sold leftovers for a month before and got 2 or 3 taels of silver, and then you said that 60 cars was a huge sum of money. 15 Taels buy 60 catties of grain

You don't even understand the three golden rules of writing novels. I advise you not to wash it.

There are too many words for water, and too many explanations of human relations and sophistication are too clear.

The update is too slow, can it be updated faster?

Nowadays, when I read novels, they mainly focus on the growth of small characters.

Isn't it possible to learn gangster skills? Now that we have joined a gang, why can't we still learn the exercises? Then it's too long to do this skill? ***, The protagonist of Our Lady. Why describe so many psychological activities? What's the use? What else is the use of the word count besides watering it down? Damn, I wrote a few exercises in this book. I just want to cheat some reading coins.