The Ninja Who Was Burned to Death by Fire Escape in Konoha
by An Inn
About This Novel
The Inn's new book has been released, "Say Good Word Game, You Invade Reality", everyone is welcome to pay attention. -- Traveling through the Sunagakure Village in the world of Naruto, he became the nephew of the Third Kazekage. Behind his seemingly beautiful background, there was a hidden murderous intention. The reputation of being a genius did not give him much preferential treatment, but instead gave him an assassination ambush from all sides. He had just escaped death, but before he could feel the coldness of the ninja world, the second ninja war ushered in. Different from the playfulness of the Fourth War, and different from the battle between leaders when the village was first established, the Second Ninja World War was a real meat grinding ground, with countless casualties among low-level ninjas. The Third Ninja World War broke the backbone of all countries. Talents were severely cut off, and children of several years old were sent to the battlefield in ignorance. Watch Konyoshi lead the weakest Sunagakure Village and fight their way out.
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Official(40)Scraped 6d ago
Only beauties are allowed to show off their physical qualities, and talented people are not allowed to use fancy words. If it weren't for the ban on writing and ink on the platform, everyone would be a tiger or wolf when picking up a pen.
Zhao Zhongxiang said this when hosting "Animal World": When the environment is no longer suitable for survival, reproduction will first stop, followed by the great migration. Wealth has nothing to do with me, and disasters will be shared equally with me.
How should I put it? It looks depressing to people, and there are too many twists and turns. This is the reason for the poor results.
Just go home
The word Konoha should be Naruto. The protagonist of Naruto was burned to death by fire escape. How can he still write about it after he was burned to death? Is he trying to be a dog-meat?
Impossible
Why is it so slow to write about the third leg of World War II? If you don't fast forward to Shippuden, it will be as unwatchable as Boruto.
The writing is really good, but there are a lot of chapters that are too watery to point out the length of others, which made me a little irritated. The description of the war between fog and fire in the middle is also a little watery. Based on the current situation, the completion should be 250 to 300 words less. If it is watery, I estimate it will be 500 words. Konoha Village has been strengthened a lot in this book. If I remember correctly, Senju Itama died long ago during the Warring States Period. I would like to give you some suggestions. The description of love is awkward, and the protagonist is not dignified when facing women, and has various petty tempers and coquettishness, especially the pharmacist Nono U. Why do you need to have a harem to do this? Men and women are equal. What are you doing like a dog licker? Your book was published on Men's Channel.
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A lump
The first problem is not being able to name it The second biggest problem is that I like to show off my writing style. For example, using Yan's more written expressions makes the originally fluent writing even more obscure. After all, this is a novel and not a document. The third is that the plot is too showy. In the first few chapters, the protagonist goes to the other party's boss for help. The cause and effect can be clearly explained in two sentences. It's a bit funny to have to write it over and over again so that readers can't understand it, and the author has to respond to comments personally.
The best Naruto fanfic I've ever read. If the ending does not start a war in the starry sky, but instead writes 200 chapters of farming follow-up, Naruto-Sasuke timeline, and Chunin exams, it will be more perfect, I personally think.
Come on, come on, come on, come on
Not much about the protagonist's family members
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Official(40)Scraped 6d ago
Only beauties are allowed to show off their physical qualities, and talented people are not allowed to use fancy words. If it weren't for the ban on writing and ink on the platform, everyone would be a tiger or wolf when picking up a pen.
Zhao Zhongxiang said this when hosting "Animal World": When the environment is no longer suitable for survival, reproduction will first stop, followed by the great migration. Wealth has nothing to do with me, and disasters will be shared equally with me.
How should I put it? It looks depressing to people, and there are too many twists and turns. This is the reason for the poor results.
Just go home
The word Konoha should be Naruto. The protagonist of Naruto was burned to death by fire escape. How can he still write about it after he was burned to death? Is he trying to be a dog-meat?
Impossible
Why is it so slow to write about the third leg of World War II? If you don't fast forward to Shippuden, it will be as unwatchable as Boruto.
The writing is really good, but there are a lot of chapters that are too watery to point out the length of others, which made me a little irritated. The description of the war between fog and fire in the middle is also a little watery. Based on the current situation, the completion should be 250 to 300 words less. If it is watery, I estimate it will be 500 words. Konoha Village has been strengthened a lot in this book. If I remember correctly, Senju Itama died long ago during the Warring States Period. I would like to give you some suggestions. The description of love is awkward, and the protagonist is not dignified when facing women, and has various petty tempers and coquettishness, especially the pharmacist Nono U. Why do you need to have a harem to do this? Men and women are equal. What are you doing like a dog licker? Your book was published on Men's Channel.
You can delete comments on Q books by yourself, so you can get 4 or more points in one search
A lump
The first problem is not being able to name it The second biggest problem is that I like to show off my writing style. For example, using Yan's more written expressions makes the originally fluent writing even more obscure. After all, this is a novel and not a document. The third is that the plot is too showy. In the first few chapters, the protagonist goes to the other party's boss for help. The cause and effect can be clearly explained in two sentences. It's a bit funny to have to write it over and over again so that readers can't understand it, and the author has to respond to comments personally.
The best Naruto fanfic I've ever read. If the ending does not start a war in the starry sky, but instead writes 200 chapters of farming follow-up, Naruto-Sasuke timeline, and Chunin exams, it will be more perfect, I personally think.
Come on, come on, come on, come on
Not much about the protagonist's family members
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