Hey, Hey, Hey, Do You Really Think That the Cooking Soldiers Only Know How to Cook?

This book of yours was originally meant to be a cooking soldier. Later, for no apparent reason, I will join the ranks of college students. Just add it, and there will be another inexplicable mercenary at the back. Every character is written in such a formulaic way As a result, a fearful banshee appeared not long after I wrote it. The protagonist must encounter this kind of plot where people around him are killed. I don't know what you're thinking, the storyline is too formulaic. Die for the plot Not to mention the protagonist's sister Foreshadowing is the same as no setting When I saw it at the front and wanted to send it back, I knew someone must have taken over it. It's so cliche. It's not surprising at all when you look at it later.

This is a hodgepodge of looms. Can you understand what you wrote? It's really hard to deal with it.

The most poisonous part of this book is the students from the college. Although the college students have good talents, they have no fighting ability. (This is how it is described in the book). So they are all in high school. Why do you describe them in this book with the same abilities as primary school students? It seems that you want to write about the interaction with the students to advance the main plot, but the writing is really awkward. You want to write about the funny interactions between the students, but also want to write about the protagonist becoming stronger. However, you lack control over the writing, so you write too much. I hope your new book can make our eyes shine.

There have been so many chapters and no one has come?